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Peace's boot camp.

Post  zerowing21 on Fri Apr 21, 2017 12:24 pm

This is where we'll train your skill to help you learn how to rp Peace.
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Post  Peace Kwest on Fri Apr 21, 2017 1:10 pm

Great. Now where do I start?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Apr 21, 2017 4:48 pm

well what exactly do you need help with for an rping aspect, we can start there and go on as I notice things.
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Post  Peace Kwest on Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:02 pm

Hmm well, I'd need a basic demonstration of the entire process.

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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:12 pm

Alright one basic post for ya coming up.

Wanting to enjoy her day off from her teaching job, Bubbles Utonium walks slowly past the shops at the mall, thinking about if she should go clothes shopping or buy something special for her family to eat for dinner. She stops at one point and taps her foot gently, crossing her arms to think.

Now this is where you interact with your character.
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Post  Peace Kwest on Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:55 am

Peace noticed Bubbles and ran toward her
"Hey Bubbles, what are you up to today?"


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Post  zerowing21 on Sat Apr 22, 2017 9:02 am

You failed to read the name correctly. Please try again.
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Post  Peace Kwest on Mon Apr 24, 2017 10:47 am

. Error .


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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Apr 24, 2017 4:46 pm

(For all purposes of the boot, when I say please try again, you have to edit your post or do a new one. Should have explained that. You're response as is, isn't something I'd accept in a boot camp, if it was in the normal rp and meant to be for comedic purposes, I would.)
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Post  Peace Kwest on Thu May 11, 2017 12:25 pm

Fixed...
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Post  zerowing21 on Sat May 13, 2017 1:56 pm

"Hello!" Bubbles chirps happily to Peace with a smile, "I'm debating on what to make tonight for Ana and Holdie. What about you?"
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Post  Peace Kwest on Fri May 19, 2017 4:35 am

"Thought I would go here and buy some tools to take care of my arm" Peace said, smiling as well.
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon May 22, 2017 12:45 pm

"Is something the matter with it?" Bubbles asks, looking at the robotic arm.
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Post  Peace Kwest on Mon May 22, 2017 1:39 pm

"Energy core leaks out of everywhere; don't know if it's dangerous or not though" Peace said, looking at his arm as well
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon May 22, 2017 1:42 pm

"Maybe you need to go see The Professor." Bubbles suggests, not really understanding the tech behind the arm. "I'm sure he can figure out if it was dangerous or not."
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Post  Peace Kwest on Wed May 24, 2017 9:52 am

"Didn't think of that until now, I will go to him. Thanks" Peace said. He waved Bubbles goodbye as he ran off the mall.
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri May 26, 2017 1:55 pm

"See you later Peace." The girl shouts and turns to think about what to get her family.

(You might want to rethink how you structured that last sentence. Words are slightly out of order. Waved Goodbye to bubbles would sound better and you missed a word since it allows to make more sense. Ran off from the mall. No need to redo it, so let's continue)
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