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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 12:47 pm

Name: Everan (2.0)
Likes to go by Eve for short.

Age: Unknown, because of the amnesia and all, looks like a young adult.
(In all actuality his body's around 22 years old.)

Ethnicity: Caucasian.

Allegiance: He's pretty sure he was a good guy in his past life. So he's like a lawful neutral.

Origins: Human.

Equipment:
First off, his boots have compartments. Since his pants don't have any room for pockets, that's where he keeps everything, each boot has about as much space as a fanny pack.

Secondly, his only weapon, the power gauntlet. It’s the black glove on his right hand. It has the ability to make hard light constructs, let the wearer fly, breath in space, and create blasts of energy. For safety reasons, it has an onboard AI, it doesn’t talk much, but it does run all the protocols for the gauntlet.
Important notes to make:
It only functions for someone with the genetic structure of Everan.

If the wearer has his genetic code it has 7 passwords that need to be by passed in order to gain full control of the gauntlet, until then it has a much smaller preset battery. As more levels are unlocked the the amount of usable battery will increase.

If the battery is depleted it’ll only allow the user to fly and will maintain life support.

The gauntlet has a life support system that can keep the user breathing in space, filter out harmful chemicals, heal minor wounds, and in the case of serious appendage loss it will form a construct replacement until a permanent one is found.

The password system was made with the intention of testing whether it was the real Everan or not. The glove is also equipped with an ai copy of the original Everan, but it can only be active for 3 minutes, and will imeadeately be deleted after use. The Everan ai is there for if Everan needs a push jumping from Level 6 to 7, and to give them a chance to meet. The abilities gained from each level go as follows

Level 0: Flight, hard light constructs, and 15% battery access

Level 1: Life support and 20% battery access

Level 2: 25% battery access, construct color changing options (they can only
be one color at a time), and planetary mapping.

Level 3: 45% battery access and the ability to scan for life forms (it can scan the room it's in and say how many life forms are in the room)

Level 4: 70% battery access

Level 5: Off world life support

Level 6: 90% battery access

Level 7: 100% battery access and the deletion of the gloves AI (It gets replaced with a much simpler AI that will only give warnings about health risks, battery levels, and other important things. In other words, no personality.)

Appearance:

Strengths:
1. He's a natural fighter. Thanks to whatever he did in his past he learned a lot about fighting, and luckily it stuck with his muscle memory.

2. Once again thanks to his past, he knows a lot of languages, both alien and those of earth. Unfortunately he's stuck in a situation like Harry Potter and snakes, he can only speak the language when talking to someone else who speaks it.

3. While he's not very physically strong, he makes up for it in how sturdy he is. He's able to take quite the beating before he starts to break.

Weaknesses:
1. He’s very over confident. Since the glove can make almost anything he can imagine he often ends up wasting his charge for the day.

2. He's an amnesiac from another dimension, he literally knows nothing about this world aside from very basic facts.

3. He has an obsessive interest in social media and the internet in general.

Personality:
Everan is the heroic type. The guy who is always willing to do what he thinks is right, even when it inconveniences him. But that's not to say he's a boy scout when it comes to these things. Not to mention that he's usually to stubborn to admit he's wrong, preferring to move the conversation on with an awkward transition. Both in and out of battle he has the tendency to have a loud mouth. While usually this is just for cracking jokes and making fun of something, he's also not the type to keep his opinion quiet. His talkative stance can lead him to getting himself, and others, into needless trouble.
While he is cocky and over confident, he's also got a softer side to him. Although he is no way smooth or romantic, often times treating his emotions like child would and bottling them up, or just lying about them.
Also, he's a bit of a perfectionist, which doesn't help when your ability is to make things with your imagination.
As I previously mentioned, he's very stubborn,  and that can often times lead to him making brash decisions and running out on his own.
Gauntlet AI: For some elaboration, it does not have a name, Everan refers to it as glove. It's very factual and straight forward, like a machine. It starts every sentence with inquiry, response, or observation.

History:
As with many stories, this one begins with a boy and his mother. At what is now an unknown time, on what is now a dead world, the boy was born. The boy grew up and he learned of heroism, responsibility, and of power. Not much else happened then. When he was older, his parents died, that wasn't a good year for him. After awhile the boy moved on. He began to do good for the people around him, eventually attracting the attention of some very powerful people. The deal he made with them is a mystery, but the results were something like a miracle.
The boy left his world in a state of peace. Afterwhich, he went on many an adventure, befriending many other heroes, and learning many valuable lessons.

At this point the boy's life was something out of a thirteen year old writers wet dreams. He had it all, fame, love, friends, adoration, and power. Then, as with all powerful people, it all came crashing down in a glorious burst of flames and death. There was no hope, just a bleak understanding of everyone’s inevitable demise.There wasn’t even escape in death, she left long before the crisis got into full swing. Even with all this, the boy strode on kept on fighting for an end. And by the gods he did find a solution. The plan itself is unimportant, but it’s results are quite the opposite. This will be kept short as to not drag it on. He jumped into a pit, it blew, not a fun time to recall.

Now of course, many things happened in the wake of his death, but you’re not here for that. You wanna know what happened to the boy. Well, to keep this short, no, he did not die, for long at least. No, in fact, surprisingly enough, he had a plan. Well, he had a good bet at least. He's unsure who did, but someone picked him up, like his mortal soul and all that. He was left somewhere safe, where he could waste his days with drink and good company. Though his body did lose it's abilities in his return to life, his assumption being that it was essentially a brand new body. All he had now was to enjoy the afterlife, but he couldn't even let himself do that, heroes guilt you could say. So with the first part of his plan fulfilled, him not actually dying. He enacted part two, he wiped his memories with the help of some favors he had, made himself a way to a different world, and left himself no form of communication. He left his life and his very existence in the hand of a stranger, himself.

Somewhere in nowhere
The boy jolts up and looks at his surrounding
“Where am I?
Who am I?
What the coco?”

Do you use nanos: Nope

NOTE: For the rp characters and official CN characters that knew my original Everan, this character looks almost exactly like my original Everan. So other characters should react accordingly.


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Re: Everan 2.0

Post  zerowing21 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 1:22 pm

Golden, you do not have to remake Everan you know. You can just edit the orginal when needed to make changes.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 1:57 pm

I know that I don't have to, but I'd still like to.
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Post  zerowing21 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 3:34 pm

Nothing can absorb an infinite amount of energy, if one could that would be OP. Please put a limit on it.

If he uses magic, he can only use multiple element if he's a shaman and they can't be high powered spell as well.

If he uses magic, he can not be a speedster nor could he have a incredibly fast healing factor, that would have to be nerfed quiet a bit.

So is it energy manipulation or magic? They're two separate things and godly energy would be sort of overboard.

Also, Keyblades are disney stuff and they should remain there.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 6:16 pm

Okay, I added the changes you mentioned, I feel like it's still not perfect but it's getting there. I'd also like to point out that beforehand I did not look up how fast mach 5 was OH MY GOD I was way off from my initial guess.
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Post  zerowing21 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 7:51 pm

you still did not address the power thing.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 8:10 pm

I'm not quite sure what you mean by the power thing, are you talking about whether it's magic or natural and all that? And on side note, I'm keeping the keyblade as a place holder until I can come up with something to serve the purpose of blunt weaponized wand.
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Post  zerowing21 on Wed Jun 28, 2017 8:34 pm

You can have your character with magic and being a speedster, that's two different power sets. Drastic power sets too. And unless your character is a shamen, he can't use 3 elements at once.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Sat Jul 01, 2017 1:53 pm

I added a lot of changes, and tried to make somethings clearer about the character.
I forgot to mention one thing about his glove though, I plan to have his level ups, as I'm gonna call them, to be far between. It's most likely that I'll have him go from level 0 to 1 so that he's aware that it's a thing, but not much for awhile.

On a side note, isn't ironic how my revamp of the character immediately needed to get revamped?
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Sat Jul 01, 2017 10:17 pm

Sorry about double posting, but I just wanted to give the heads up that I put in the first draft for his history. Once again, sorry for the double post.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Sat Jul 01, 2017 11:09 pm

Oh my god I can't believe I'm gonna post three times in a row in the same day. So I got a picture.
First off, I'd like to say sorry for the triple posting thing.
Secondly, I want to apologize for the size and quality of the picture. My art program crapped itself earlier today so I did on paper and used my phone to take the picture.
And the I wanna say sorry for the triple post again.

I'll just be waiting for review over here.
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Post  Mr.Didathing on Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:03 am

I'd approve, but I think I need an explanation as to why their personality fluctuates so much.
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:09 am

He has no solid personality. He needs to have three positives and three negative traits.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:08 pm

Personality has been solidified, I think.
I feel like he's close, but still missing something. LIKE A GOOD PICTURE
What do you think needs touching up, or elaboration?
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Post  Mr.Didathing on Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:35 pm

Personally I can't think of anything, so I'll be the first approval.
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Jul 10, 2017 12:07 am

1) The history reads more like something for a fanfic, I'd rather you give us a normal history and not something with dialogue.

2) We did a past event where we went to the powerpunks dimension and we're not doing anything with it again.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:17 am

Alright, I updated history, also I did not know that powerpunk was a one time thing, kinda disappointing.
Also, when you say like a fan fic, is that okay, is it really bad, I'm kinda trying to improve my writing.
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Post  zerowing21 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 8:48 am

Well here's the thing, if its for a history of a character in the thread, then its sort of bad. But its good if you wish to post up a story thread in the fan fic section of the site.


The powerpunks stuff was just one event since we had a broader thing going on there. Using them once was all we could get away with.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 12:57 pm

Ooooohhh, gotcha, thanks for explaining it all.
Well now that that's all cleared up, do you see anything else that needs workshopping?
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Post  zerowing21 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:26 pm

I'd like a bit more detail on the history in the late half.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:54 pm

Detail has been added!
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Post  zerowing21 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 2:32 pm

How did he rid himself of his abilities.
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 2:43 pm

Magic, I guess? I didn't really think it important enough to make a point out of it. I'm now realizing that was a mistake.
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Post  zerowing21 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 3:46 pm

It's one of those points that needs to have a reasoning since it makes little sense
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Post  GoldenBladeX100 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 5:21 pm

I think I got it this time, and just to be safe I added some more to the end.
Do you think some things are still left too unexplained?
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