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Re: Mace warrior

Post  zerowing21 on Thu Aug 17, 2017 3:00 pm

But that doesn't answer what will happen to him. Does he just flake out or something?
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Thu Aug 17, 2017 3:07 pm

Yea, he fake out of his decommissioning
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Post  zerowing21 on Thu Aug 17, 2017 3:13 pm

what? So he just plays dumb and pretends he's decommissioned if things go badly?
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Thu Aug 17, 2017 4:37 pm

I guess
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Post  zerowing21 on Thu Aug 17, 2017 9:24 pm

That doesn't sound like a good weakness. If you say he begins to freak out and panic if his plans fall apart, that would work. That is an example of how it could be done.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Fri Aug 18, 2017 7:45 am

Ok
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:39 am

I do suggest rephrasing the third weakness to reflect what you've told me and maybe rephrasing the second weakness as well.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:41 am

zerowing21 wrote:I do suggest rephrasing the third weakness to reflect what you've told me and maybe rephrasing the second weakness as well.
so like add the stuff i said
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:44 am

More like a variant on what I said, but you can go with what you said.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:46 am

zerowing21 wrote:More like a variant on what I said, but you can go with what you said.
i think i did enough, ill do update when he gets development later on
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:48 am

Well, we do want to make sure his weaknesses work now, so when he does develop later you can enhance the weaknesses. Also for ethnicity, Americans isn't one. American Indian yes, but not Americans in general.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:55 am

Fair enough
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Aug 21, 2017 3:21 pm

"can't go into battle when his friends got hurt for a little"

And what if they are hurt during battle? Does he freeze up and just sit there like a lump?
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Mon Aug 21, 2017 10:26 pm

zerowing21 wrote:"can't go into battle when his friends got hurt for a little"

And what if they are hurt during battle? Does he freeze up and just sit there like a lump?
he freeze up
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Post  zerowing21 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 1:09 pm

Then please edit that in.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Tue Aug 22, 2017 1:14 pm

zerowing21 wrote:Then please edit that in.
ok
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Aug 27, 2017 11:09 pm

I wish for you to expand on his child hood, saying it was awesome, doesn't tell me anything.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Mon Aug 28, 2017 6:58 pm

zerowing21 wrote:I wish for you to expand on his child hood, saying it was awesome, doesn't tell me anything.
ok, maybe help me on that one
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Aug 28, 2017 7:07 pm

I can give you an idea, but this has to be from you. As a little kid, was he bistrerlous, quiet or something else? What about his parents back then, did they scold him, tell about his friends growing up and how he got along with them.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Mon Aug 28, 2017 7:24 pm

zerowing21 wrote:I can give you an idea, but this has to be from you. As a little kid, was he bistrerlous, quiet or something else? What about his parents back then, did they scold him, tell about his friends growing up and how he got along with them.
actually he have a good relationship with his family, keeps getting good grades, and being nice
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Post  zerowing21 on Tue Sep 05, 2017 1:35 pm

Then please go into the first two points if you can and being nice doesn't exactly matter in the backstory unless he changes from something into that type of person.
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Post  zerowing21 on Sat Sep 16, 2017 4:48 pm

I would request you tell us when you made an edit. I had no idea you edited on the 7th until today. It helps facilitate in making sure everything is in order.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Sat Sep 16, 2017 4:53 pm

zerowing21 wrote:I would request you tell us when you made an edit. I had no idea you edited on the 7th until today. It helps facilitate in making sure everything is in order.
ok
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Post  zerowing21 on Sat Sep 16, 2017 7:24 pm

Ty.
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Post  fusionfallfan1995 on Sat Sep 16, 2017 7:25 pm

zerowing21 wrote:Ty.
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