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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:21 pm

Name: Gauxlin [Real name Bre McFinnson] Old KND:Numbuh 586
Age: 15 [Currently while fighting fuse]
Ethnicity: Irish
Race: Human
Fighting style :Prefers Duel wielding weapons, Gets best of both worlds
Allegiance: Neutral-Fights for her own goals.
Origins: Human
Powers: none
Appearance: Ginger/Irish stereotypical color, Face bombed with freckles, A large scar on her face, sleak like build, Has a neat tie for which she has some hair cover her blind eye And a blonde streak down said hair. Her typical outfit is standard jeans and a star wars phase 1 clone shirt, her standard fighting armour is a BRA armour prefering the style

Strengths: Planning[A few years leading a crackpot Spec ops team taught her a lot], Creating tech [a few  Years of using 2x4 technology she hated it, Prefer SCI-FI like weapons and tech] Tough [Through Numerous fights she learned to block out pain, Built up an endurance against it She has become tough before fuse was a thing] Honourable She would never stoop to betraying anyone and would never break a deal [She would never make a deal she would want to break in the first place] Berserker [She has a short temper when fighting and insults make her a better fighter,]

Weaknesses: Friends [Being a girl she can't resist a good friend to talk to when things get rough for her They are a weakness because she is vulnerable meaning if a friend betrayed her she'd be in a depression like state until she has taught that friend a lesson although it makes her weaker and harder to trust others], Talking about her past [She dispises it, but only good friends get her to talk about it It makes her weak to insults, and it makers her fighting style sloppy She's more suspetiable to mistakes when in this state.], Has an ego larger than the earth [Those who know always use it, she's blind and let's her think she'll win like nothing else, [like on one occasion she was fighting teens, and her big sister said that she'll be too hard to fight and that she'll win like nothing when in actually she got cocky and lost a tooth and slipped on ice and fell to her bottom]


Personality: Rude to new people, Hates stuck up officers [One of the top things she hates] Ferocious [Tends to scare people] Bossy [Wants to be the one to call the shots]
Great leadership skills [She can keep a squad's morale up even through the most dangerous  and scary of situations and] Her soft side [ She's a tomboy meaning she mostly has boys as friends but has very few friends whom are the same gender as her , She would prefer to have more girl friends as she hates the boys she knows and rarely likes to actually be known to be their friend, She often goes berserk if they try anything with her [Kissing Inuendo's And the thing that sets her off Calling her "girly" She once gave an officer a blackeye for calling her the girly who leads a squad Let's just say that officer moved sector after that] She hates boys because she was bullied all up to her 12th, Three boys challenged her to a duel [being an ex Spec ops leader she knew if she was beaten she'd have a good team mate[s] The reason why she hates boys is because she was bullied all way through school, and hated every bit of it. The reason why she those boys as her friends even though she finds them disgusting is they know what to do and what not to do infront of her which allowed her to think that there was exceptions even though most boys are annoying and unthinking,As a great leader she knows when to make exceptions.


History: It started on one day on a walk from her school to home, A kid yelled "Watch out" As a gum shot just missed her, Course she thought this was a game and quickly tried to beat the gunner, She did to the kids amazement, Of course this kid was surprised by this and quickly recommended her to in the KND, from there she worked her way up, being stout and couragous, always supporting the rights of all kids Gauxlin used to lead one of the best Special Operation squads within KND But before that, When she was just an underling she was betrayed by her mentor Numbuh 620 She got into a fight with 620 for letting the enemy get away with stealing her prized possession a Black and white samurai helmet that was passed down from kid to kid,The reason why it meant so much is because it used to be her sisters, It was the first ever villan she defeated,  The fight earned her a scar on her left cheek Raisng up to her eye, causing her to be partially blind, Of course she views it as a painful remind that not every KND members supported the cause of all kids deserving rights,
After that, She speeded through the ranks, getting to officer status at 6 after many successful missions she was rewarded with a Squad within the special operations of KND, She was one of their best agents, Capturing many villans, Defeating naferious plots with ease
,Although over the years, as she got older she started screwing things up [On purpose lied about it being extremely hard] Knowing she'd be decommissioned without thought, She went MIA pretending to save of her squad
She was 10 at this time after a year passed, she changed her, name and identity [She told her parents that she was getting bullied and she hated it ,so they moved to sector v, where things will always go wrong, Her mother is overprotective while her father prefers her to stay and get over it, but She got the berserk trait from her mother so you can guess what won the father over, When she is going off fighting she pretends to tell them that she's spending a day with friends, as they are gullible enough to believe it]  A year later after the KND mourned her loss During that year, she changed her identity [Look in appearence for the current style she has] Yet the KND have yet to figure out how they missed her after all these years
One day she's shopping for typical girl things trying to remain in undercover [She's 13 at this time] As the convience store she's in transforms into a hideout for the teens, shocking her, she falls over, and gets ready to defend herself when Cree asks "how'd you manage to keep undercover for so long?" She answered "Spec ops skills are worth it you know," And that's how she'd get introduced to the teens, and she figured she could use them as tool
When she was 13 she proved her worth by beating an elite squad led by Numbuh 86, who at the time was sleeping, [Don't ask] earning some valuable intel, She earned the right to lead a squad, although she rarely actually decides to fight for the teen, earning her feared reputation when fuse attacks she is at the age of 15, and decides that teens are too welled up fighting the ground forces of fuse, so She decides to butter KND up helping them whenever she can She somehow got enough cred to get a small squad filled with 86 and 362 and some of her current squad, Her plan is to corrupt 86 and 362, to make them join her, while 362 agrees with her opinions on the decommisioning She wouldn't agree with the age restriction, but 86 thought the oppisite thinking that the age could be bumped up, but hated getting rid of the decommisioning chamber
As she kept winning almost every fight against with fuse their opinions changed and they agreed with her, thinking she could make KND a better place although 86 has a grudge, They still often will be at each others throats unless they are fighting for their lives although Maurice and chad are more accepting of her, unlike her KND Cohorts, Gauxlin spends most of her time in Sector V and when she's preparing for a mission she will usually head towards the area of the faction who is helping her prepare for it,
When she's not doing missions she is usually found chilling at The Cul De sac
Do you use nanos: Yes.


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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:39 pm

explain how friends are a weakness to her please.

also for powers, she would have none if she's human.
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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:57 pm

That better?
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Post  Professor Utonium on Fri Feb 09, 2018 5:10 pm

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:Race: Human
Origins: Ex-KND
Powers: Techie

Origins would be human, and she wouldn't have any powers as a human.

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:Appearance: Ginger/Irish stereotypical color, Face bombed with freckles, A large scar on her face,

Please describe her more. What's her body type? What does her hair look like? What's her usual outfit?

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:Strengths: Tough [Through Numerous fights she learned to block out pain, Built up an endurance against it]
Weaknesses: Friends [ Being a girl she can't resist a good friend to talk to when things get rough for her], Talking about her past [She dispises it, but only good friends get her to talk about it],

Why exactly those this strength make her stand out from everyone else? There's an oncoming war against alien invaders, so everybody is pretty tough now. I'd also like you to elaborate more on the weaknesses, and add a third.

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:She's a tomboy meaning she mostly has boys as friends but has very few friends whom are the same gender as her , She would prefer to have more girl friends as she hates the boys she knows and rarely likes to actually be known to be their friend,

Why would she only have boys as friends when she hates them? Doesn't make much sense that she would still let only boys be her friends if she hated them so much,

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:Of course she views it as a painful remind that not every KND members supports the cause

What exactly is the cause and how does it relate to her samurai helmet being stolen?

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:Knowing she'd be decommissioned without thought, She went MIA pretending to save half of her squad [the others stayed with her being the same age] She was 12 at this time after a year passed, she changed her, name and identity [With her parents forceful agreement] Her friends also decided to do the same

How did she manage to evade the KND, along with a whole group of renegade kid agents? If she changed her identity, then we can only assume she moved away from her hometown. Perhaps it'd be good to mention that when she changed her identity that she moved to Townsville/Bellwood/Pokey Oaks? How did she manage to convince her parents to let her do this when they have no clue was the KND is?

If she was 12 before Fuse invaded, then she would be 18 now in the RP, as Fuse has been attacking for five years now. If she's currently 15, then she would have been turning 13 during Fuse's attack, and KND Agents are allowed to not be decomissioned until Fuse is defeated. With this in mind, how did she react to the Fusion Invasion, and what does she think of Fuse and the Fusions?

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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 5:17 pm

I'm trying my best here and This is my first attempt, I'm trying not to make her over powered.

UPDATE
I updated it,
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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:16 pm

Is that better NOW?
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Post  Professor Utonium on Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:31 pm

Please do NOT double post. RPCoordinators will post their thoughts after they review it, so please be patient.

I'd like you to reread my last post and apply changes accordingly.

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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:39 pm

But I did change it?
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Post  Professor Utonium on Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:44 pm

Yes, but there were things I asked about in my reply that remain unchanged/answered.

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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:48 pm

Could you delete the things I answered?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Feb 09, 2018 8:30 pm

She is in need of a third weakness.
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Fri Feb 09, 2018 9:21 pm

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:Origins: Ex-KND

Factions does not go here. Please place one of the following: EVO, Alien, Magic User, Imaginary Friend, Demon, Vampire, Cyborg, Created Minion, Maledetto, or Human.

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:History:
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Gauxlin used to lead one of the best Special Operation squads within KND But before that, When she was just an underling she was betrayed by her mentor Numbuh 620 She got into a fight with 620 for letting the enemy get away with stealing her prized possession a Black and white samurai helmet that was passed down from kid to kid, The fight earned her a scar on her left cheek Raisng up to her eye, causing her to be partially blind, Of course she views it as a painful remind that not every KND members supported the cause , Although over the years, as she got older she started screwing things up [On purpose lied about it being extremely hard] Knowing she'd be decommissioned without thought, She went MIA pretending to save half of her squad [the others stayed with her being the same age] She was 12 at this time after a year passed, she changed her, name and identity [With her parents forceful agreement] Her friends also decided to do the same, A year later after the KND mourned her loss
A year later she joined the Teens  to fight the KND and teach them that decommissioning causes more problems than it fixes, She has created her special squad with loyal friends,

You seemed to have been cut off. Was there more you intended to add?

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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 9:25 pm

Don't ask, Didn't register the thing I fixed.
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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 9:32 pm

I've been doing this all day.
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Feb 09, 2018 10:12 pm

You seem to have more negative personality traits than positive, can you add in at least one more positive.
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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Fri Feb 09, 2018 10:20 pm

Done.
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Post  zerowing21 on Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:09 am

What is her typical outfit that she wears.

Can you give us anything in her history about pre KND, like how her relationship with her family was or semi important events pre KND. The bullying incident that start it all wouldn't be bad to put in either.

Having proud after irish is not needed.
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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Sat Feb 10, 2018 10:51 am

Done, Again.
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Post  Professor Utonium on Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:10 am

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:She's a tomboy meaning she mostly has boys as friends but has very few friends whom are the same gender as her , She would prefer to have more girl friends as she hates the boys she knows and rarely likes to actually be known to be their friend
TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:She hates boys because she was bullied all up to her 12th, Three boys challenged her to a duel [being an ex Spec ops leader she knew if she was beaten she'd have a good team mate[s] The reason why she hates boys is because she was bullied all way through school, and hated every bit of it.

Please explain how she mostly has boys as friends when she hates them. If she hates them, why would she let herself be surrounded by them if they disgust her?

I'd be interested to know what her KND Agent Numbuh was too, but you can keep that a secret as well.

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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:32 am

Yet another update.
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Post  zerowing21 on Sat Feb 10, 2018 1:25 pm

I'm seeing a minor contradiction. If speaking about her past makes her weaker to insult, then would that make her berserk strength kind of useless when insulted?
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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Sat Feb 10, 2018 1:48 pm

That means if she gets insulted by a friend It will hurt. the berserk ability is only active when fighting anyway.
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Post  Professor Utonium on Sat Feb 10, 2018 3:51 pm

That still doesn't really explain it still.

Maybe when she's insulted she's hurt, but then she uses that as a motivation to be stronger and better.

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Post  TA Agent Gauxlin on Sat Feb 10, 2018 5:05 pm

I changed it, She gets hurt when friends betray her.
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Post  Professor Utonium on Sat Feb 10, 2018 5:21 pm

TA Agent Gauxlin wrote:
When she was 13 she proved her worth by beating an elite squad led by Numbuh 86, who at the time was sleeping, [Don't ask] earning some valuable intel, She earned the right to lead a squad, although she rarely actually decides to fight for the teen, earning her feared reputation when fuse attacks for five years  she is at the age of 15, and decides that teens are too welled up fighting the ground forces of fuse, so She decides to butter KND up helping them whenever she can She somehow got enough cred to get a small squad filled with 86 and 362 and some of her current squad, Her plan is to corrupt 86 and 362, to make them join her, while 362 agrees with her opinions on the decommissioning She wouldn't agree with the age restriction, but 86 thought the opposite thinking that the age could be bumped up, but hated getting rid of the decommissioning chamber

Is she working with or against the KND?

Since she disappeared to avoid decomissioning, the KND would be looking for her to complete the decomissioning, and 362 and 86 would definitely try to enforce that.

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