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Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Sun Oct 20, 2013 7:29 pm

(Putting Hunter on Hiatus)

Name: Aboddon/John Nova

Age: Looks 23

Ethnicity: When Human he is Black American

Allegiance: Villains

Origins: Full Demon

Powers:
-Conjuring illusions (Medium/High)
-Teleporting (Low)
-Creating objects out of thin air (Can make objects that they have seen before and have the right materials to do so. .) (Low/Medium)
-Supernatural Perspective-Able to see hidden supernatural activity and beings. (Low)
-Telekinesis (Medium)
-Shape Shifting into a Black Jackal (Medium)
Appearance: http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif Looks like this when in demon form.
When in human form he is a Black American with a white tank top and black jeans with sunglasses (Since the Sun hurts his eyes.). He is also known to shapeshift into any other male bodies.

Strengths: Can be persuasive. Able to hide in the dark rather well. Strong leader. Can be quite intimidating. Has a way with animals, being able to kind of tell them what to do. Is a pretty good cook to if you're a demon and like fresh limbs.

Weaknesses: Eyes are very sensitive to sunlight, making him wear sunglasses. Holy Water/Salt/Iron/Purified Blood. His random mood swings can cause him to shift back and forth between demon and human form, making him become weak and powerless. His prank side can lead him to be very reckless.

Personality: Has a very similar personality to the infamous Deapool. Abaddon can be known to be very serious or a big prankster, considering in which body he is in or how his mood is. Sometimes he can have random mood swings for no apparent reason. Despises all humans and tries to make them as miserable as possible, sometimes leading them to insanity. Usually hates all kinds of animals, though some he likes. He can also act like a stubborn child when he feels uncooperative. He also has a strange craving for tacos or burritos.

History: Abaddon was once an assistant of Demongo and his demon army and was proved to be a harsh general/leader. Though many demons despised him they still respected him due to his high authority (though not as much anymore.) and will do almost anything he says. A few hundred years later Abaddon started becoming more and more of a prankster which got him caught stealing from Aku the Grand. His power weakened, Abaddon was banished from the Demon Land and had to live in the Overworld (Though he can still travel through the Undeworld and different dimensions.). He is now helping other villains and leading armies here and there while in the form of John Nova and also trying to make the Human's lives as miserable as possible.

Do you use nanos: He despises the insignificant creatures.


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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  zerowing21 on Sun Oct 20, 2013 7:55 pm

Ok brad, first Powers. Telekinetic wouldn't be medium to high it would just me medium and he can't have pryokinetics too. Plus you have 7 powers listed, you can only have up to 6.

When you mean very hidden in the dark, you mean he is able to hide in the dark rather well. You kind of need to expand on the strengths and the weaknesses since it feels lopsided and you need to make sure that his personality is expanded on and he has more vices.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Sun Oct 20, 2013 8:07 pm

Okay! Just edited.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Mon Oct 21, 2013 12:17 am

Undead Brad wrote:
Powers:
-Dream Walking-Can go into dreams and minorly change them. (Low)
He cannot change dreams. This is a form of warping that isn't allowed. He can walk into dreams, see them, but not change them.

Strengths: Has a way with animals, being able to kind of tell them what to do.
To what extent does this work? Are we talking wild animals, live stock, pets?

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Mon Oct 21, 2013 11:39 am

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:
Undead Brad wrote:
Powers:
-Dream Walking-Can go into dreams and minorly change them. (Low)
He cannot change dreams. This is a form of warping that isn't allowed. He can walk into dreams, see them, but not change them.

Strengths: Has a way with animals, being able to kind of tell them what to do.
To what extent does this work? Are we talking wild animals, live stock, pets?
1) I'm gonna change Dream Walking into Shapeshifting

2) I would say wild animals.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Blueyedemoness on Mon Oct 21, 2013 9:45 pm

First off, you could just say that he looks 23 instead of having the slash there.

Second off the powers are a bit over powered, mostly the "Creating objects out of thin air (Can only create small to medium size objects.) (Low/Medium)". This is Sue territory and can be abused very badly if given the opportunity. If anything you should have it that your character can make objects that they have seen before and have the right materials to do so.

Third off does it meant that only his eyes are affected by the sun? I mean anyone who looks directly in the sun will have their eyes burned and yet you say his whole body is affected. Does this mean as long as he doesn't LOOK at the sun then his body is fine? Does it need not protection from the sun?

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Mon Oct 21, 2013 9:59 pm

Blueyedemoness wrote:First off, you could just say that he looks 23 instead of having the slash there.

Second off the powers are a bit over powered, mostly the "Creating objects out of thin air (Can only create small to medium size objects.) (Low/Medium)". This is Sue territory and can be abused very badly if given the opportunity. If anything you should have it that your character can make objects that they have seen before and have the right materials to do so.

Third off does it meant that only his eyes are affected by the sun? I mean anyone who looks directly in the sun will have their eyes burned and yet you say his whole body is affected. Does this mean as long as he doesn't LOOK at the sun then his body is fine? Does it need not protection from the sun?
1&2) Edited
3)As long as he doesn't look directly into the sun he won't be reduced to ashes, but his eyesight is still hindered greatly in sunlight, making him wear sunglasses.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:34 pm

Would've thought more people would've seen this... Shocked 
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  zerowing21 on Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:38 pm

Some people haven't been paying much attention to this brad, I'll get on techee's and others cases.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Mr.Didathing on Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:46 pm

I dig it. Accepted.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:46 pm

Undead Brad wrote:Powers:
-Shape Shifting (Medium)
What does he shape-shift into?

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:53 pm

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:
Undead Brad wrote:Powers:
-Shape Shifting (Medium)
What does he shape-shift into?
His favorite form (and most used) is a Black Jackal.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Dec 04, 2013 9:00 pm

So he shifts into animals, or just one form?

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Wed Dec 04, 2013 9:04 pm

He can shift into smaller animals (Birds,Mice, ect.) but he prefers the Jackal of all.
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Dec 04, 2013 9:27 pm

POWERS THAT CANNOT BE USED IN RP EVER

In an effort to avoid Mary-Sueing/Gary-Stuing, here is a list of the powers that are not allowed:
• Curing EVOs
• Massive teleporting
• Transforming into large machines
• Controlling all machines
• Invulnerability
• Massive psychic abilities (No mind control, no memory manipulation, no hypnotic spells, no lifting buildings or cars, no precognition)
• Limited use of fire and other elements (unless you’re from the school; no natural disasters or acts of god)
• NO OMNIPOTENCE OR OTHER OMNI ABILITIES (you can’t have all abilities)
• No mass, time (be it time travel or warping) or reality warping
• No power negation, bestowal, augmentation, or mimicry
• No inhuman strength, especially if you have no powers whatsoever
• No eternal life
• No impenetrable defenses
• No animal powers of any kind (minus super-sight or super-hearing)
• No soul collecting or soul detection, that is Grim's and Demongo's area
No transforming into animals
You can have him shift into a jackal since his demon roots would allow for it, but only a jackal.

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Blueyedemoness on Wed Dec 04, 2013 10:32 pm

First off, you didn't change the 'creating objects out of thin air' as much as you should have. He CAN'T and I mean CAN NOT make objects out of THIN AIR. That is just god modding and being very suish. He can use demon magic along with the RIGHT MATERIALS to make an object that he wants. But he has to have SEEN the object and has the materials for it. If not then he can't make them.

Second off, I'm not sure how the sun instantly burns up his whole body into flames by looking at it but it doesn't even hurt his skin very much. It's also very vampire-like and I believe that the two are different races. You could just say his eyes are really sensitive to light or something.

Third off, I agree with Kyra with the Jackal thing. He can only turn into that animal

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Undead Brad on Thu Dec 05, 2013 7:17 am

Okay, that would be fine Smile
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Thu Dec 05, 2013 11:23 pm

Alright, I'll give him my accept, so you need 2 more approvals

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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  zerowing21 on Fri Dec 06, 2013 1:34 am

*takes out a stamp and stamps approved on the characters forehead.*
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Re: Abaddon/John Nova [Hiatus]

Post  techee on Fri Dec 06, 2013 1:11 pm

APPROVE!
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