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Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Ryuga on Sun Dec 01, 2013 2:01 am

Name: Ramon Monroe
Age: 14
Ethnicity: European
Power: Light (School: Lux)
Appearance: Click Here and Click Here for Ramon's Mother, Carol's appearance
Race: Human
Allegiance: Hero
Origins: Magic

Powers



Light Cannons- Blast of light beams shot from Ramon's hands (Low)

Solar Flare- Energy gathering technique where Ramon gathers energy from the sun and casts it a a gigantic flare of light making it hard to see for a short period of time (High)

Hard Light- A defense that's made with the lightest usage of light but such a hard defense to break when used. (Medium)

Luxify- Founded in the Monroe family line of people of Lux are able to amp there weapon with light surrounding light Lux users outlining in the day but this grants extra power in their weapon but the amount of light used onto it can vary your stamina drop (Low-High)

Lightspeed- Combined speed and light energy on hands used to cause high damage to the enemy (High)

Weapon: Crossbows

Strengths


  • Skilled Crossbow User



  • Great at playing the piano



  • Above average speed


Weaknesses


  • Can't handle being under pressure



  • His curiosity can be good yet dangerous when interested in the wrong things



  • Can be ignorant when something or someone ticks him off


Personality: Ramon is your type of guy who is sweet and sour. He's kind hearted to the ones he loves and cares for. His sour side is his unpleasant side when coco off or such and your type of guy to say something ignorant or smartelic or just completely go off on somebody. He loves helping people out with anything if he knows how to do it or just out of pure kindness. Ramon had quite the curiosity for new things he comes across or just likes

Ramon's History

    To start Ramon's History off, the Monroe Family is Ramon's mothers side of the Family. The family has its huge legacy of Lux users. But more than anything, males born into the Monroe Family is rare somehow and only happens every 50 years or so. Ramon's mother, Carol Monroe happened to gave birth to that male that comes during so many years. His mother was happy to give birth to that child. Ramon has grown up to be one of the best Lux users in the Family. He has lived his childhood years in the Monroe Mansion that has been around for many decades. He loved what had been offered in the mansion over the years as a kid. When Ramon turned 13, his mother gave him her crossbows. It was high tech, not even Dexlabs or MI tech, something she's crafted over the years evolution of what new tech had to offer. She also began teaching Ramon more about his Light Powers and worked a lot with learning light techniques and some unique things the Monroe's have come up with. A year has come by and Ramon now has been inproving a lot with the power of Light and is very skilled with his Crossbows he has gotten from his mother and has decided to fight in the battle against Fuse and other Evils.


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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Ryuga on Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:37 pm

Ramon is now ready for reviewing
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Sun Dec 08, 2013 7:33 pm

Ryuga wrote:Lightspeed- Combined speed and light energy on hands used to possibly K.O. The enemy (High)
Remove K.O. part and switch it to high damage

Weaknesses-

1. Hates being under pressure
This is more of a personality, unless you mean he doesn't do well under pressure.

2. Ramon is picky with the way his food is made
Not a weakness, more of a personality.

Personality: Ramon is your type of guy who is sweet and sour. He's kind hearted to the ones he loves and cares for. His sour side is his unpleasant side when coco off or such and your type of guy to say something ignorant or smart-alic or just completely go off on somebody.
His personality needs a little bit more.

History:
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Ramon was born the long line history of the Monroe Family. Through his mothers side. He's been raised in a mansion and was taught a lot and still is as of today.  Ramon's mother was a very skilled fighter, smart, and so many other things. His father other the other hand was never there for him at all as he grew up. Around the age of 8, Ramon's mother Carol began teaching him the uses if of his light magic powers. At the age there was very little basics but with that his mother decided to teach him skills using bow n' arrows. Ramon loved the use of the bow n' arrows and practiced everyday with it with his mother. She also used bow n' arrows so he learned a lot from her. When Ramon was at the age of 10, one day a man came into the mansion him and his mother lived in. He was shady and was in a black trench coat and was obviously looking for something. Ramon was playing the piano with an instructor and the man was lured in by the music. The man saw how exotic and beautiful the playing was. The instructor noticed and held Ramon's hand as a signal that he needed to stop. The man walked closer and the instructor had got up with Ramon and backed up. The man saw the boys face and he finally spoke. "Those eyes...are you?" Ramon said "Whst about my eyes? I don't even know you..." He said in fear. The man said "My dear boy...I know you...your my son..." He said as he walked closer. Ramon was so terrified he didn't know what to say. He ran tried to run but he was caught and grabbed by the man that claims he's his father. The man said "Now Ramon...tell me where mommie is" He said while he held right on the boy. "She's...she's upstairs..." The man replied "Lead me to her..." While held on tight and in fear the boy had no choice but to lead him to her. He led the man to her to where she was in her bedroom. Ramon's mother saw the man and said "Noah...why are you here?!!!???!" The man revealed as Noah said "Carol...I'm here for you obviously? Are boy has grown up quite the little boy hasn't he my darling?" Carol said "LET MY SON GO!!!" "You mean our son?" Noah pushed Ramon to the ground and gunned for Carol. "MOM!!!" Ramon cried for but she tried shooting him with a light blast but a failed attemp as he dodged the shots quickly and bashed the woman in the head with a gun. Carol was in no place to fight back now as it was up to Ramon. The woman said "Ramon...my bow...the bow." Ramon got up and looked around for a bow as he saw it on a case on the wall and grabbed it and the arrows. Noah was slapping the poor mother around as he loaded the bow with the arrow and fired the mans leg. The man stopped and cried in pain as the arrow blew up in a small explosion to cause damage. Ramon kept firing and Noah said "Forget you Carol...and Especially you Ramon..." The man said as he suddenly warped off. After frat Ramon helped his mother and treated her wounds. His mother said "Ramon...you saved my life...what you did for me was brave of you to do..." His mother smiled as Ramon suddenly hugged his mom tightly. The next day later his mother called Ramon down for talk. His mother was sitting in the living room and Ramon sat next to her. Mage said "The man you saw yesterday was your father Noah... Before you were born, he was a good man until he had and affair with another. But that woman was not normal and showed him different things and ways he said that drove him to what he does now...he a bad person now and there are other bad people out there Ramon that need our help..." She said and then pulled out the Bow n' Arrow that he used to protect his mother. "This is my Bow n' Arrow...and u want you to have it." Ramon held it and tears came down his face as he said "Ill help those in need...you have my word mom..." After that, he trained with his mother to become stronger with Light power and his Bow n' Arrow and to help those who are in need
The dialogue isn't really necessary, but you should explain who the Monroe family is.

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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  techee on Mon Dec 09, 2013 3:47 pm

To start off, it looks great all the way up to the history. The history is lengthy and I think it needs to be either shortened or chunk it into separate paragraphs.
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Ryuga on Sat Dec 14, 2013 2:01 pm

Fixed
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Dec 14, 2013 11:29 pm

You didn't fix everything, the last bit as kyra said, no diagloge in the history
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Ryuga on Sun Dec 15, 2013 12:47 am

Remade the history
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  zerowing21 on Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:39 pm

It looks better but less block of text. I'll give my tentative approval.
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Mr.Didathing on Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:53 pm

Ehhhhhhhhhh, approved I guess.
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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Tue Dec 17, 2013 7:50 pm

He's better, so I approve.

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Re: Ramon Monroe [Hiatus]

Post  techee on Tue Dec 17, 2013 8:15 pm

I will accept him.
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