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Donatella Pendragon

Post  Flame Melody on Fri Jan 17, 2014 12:43 pm

Name: Donatella (Dona) Pendragon
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: White
Race: Vidalian
Allegiance: Good Guys.
Appearance and body type:
Spoiler:
 

Powers: Ice Magic.

Ice Blast:

Releases ice blasts from her sword to attack the enemy. This spell might stun target for several seconds.

Power of Attack: Medium.

Freeze:

Donatella can freeze target for few minutes by releasing ice wind from her hand.

Power of Ability: Low.

Blizzard:

She can rarely use this attack. This attack uses a lot of her powers. She can lose all her powers for a lot of time if she ever uses this attack. She never uses but it in very dire situations. This attack summons a massive blizzard in the area she is in for several seconds as it unleashes ice-like thunders at the targets exterminating everything in its path. Of course, this attack isn't stable at all and can be cancelled anytime. Even if it was cancelled after a second, she loses all her powers just to summon it. If she ever uses it for a long time, she can risk going wild and her powers get uncontrollable. She risks even dying if she used it for long so she doesn't try to approach this attack.

Power of Attack: High.

Strengths: Donatella has a very good sense of leaderhsip and she is a qucik thinker. She also have a decent strength and agility.
 
Weaknesses: Intellectual dishonesty often. Clumsy and stubborn that she doesn't listen to anyone sometimes and she is extra daring which can cost her her life at most times.


Personality:
 
Donatella is a kind heart, chivalrous type of women. She have a sense of justice and she is willing to sacrifice herself for anyone in danger even if he/she isn't her friends. Born to a family that have defended this country for centuries, Dona possesses a swordsmanship and magical fighting skills that by far extends the abilities most Vidalian fighters have. She is considered one of Vidalia's most skillful fighters in the long run. She is also hyperactive and doesn't likes to stay still in one place and she requires lots of thrill and action her life or else she'd be eternally bored.
 
Despite her strength and the fear she brings in the arena, Donatella is a senstive type of girl in the modern life. She's a smart quick thinker, and is also clumsy. Yes, clumsy. She often scatters her things and items and she's also a messy type of girl. She's got somewhat a sense of humor and she's sociable and friendly with others. Needless to say she's not a morning person and would rather wake up at noon. Her creativity has a solution for a lot of things and she can figure out solutions in deep pressure and knows how to remain herself calm.
 
Regardless all that, she's also a witty kind of person when it comes to figuring solutions and coming in the right time with a solution. Besides when she was at school though. She also gets nervous quickly when she is handed paperwork or stuff of that sort. Knowing she might rule her kingdom soon, she would try to avoid this at all costs to avoid doing paperwork.
 
Date of Birth : Friday, December 18th 2021.
Species (If applicable): Sky-Vidalian
  
History: 
 
Long History:

Spoiler:

Cecil Pendragon, the head royal guard in Vidalia, was once wandering around the forest of Northern Vidalia with troops of the royal guards. There have been rumors of a winged basilisk roaming and causing terror all over Vidalia and it have been traced and finally found to be centering in the Crimson Forest. The leaves and the trunks and even the grass are all colored in the shades of red and orange.
 
Myths say that once the four dragons that created the universe had a fiery bloodshed with each other which caused their splattering blood to spread among the forest; eternally coloring everything in red.
 
As he approached deeper in the forest, strange things started to occur. Several of Cecil's men disappeared without any sign of warning. The paths started to look the same and the road started to feel like an endless journey. Soon, Cecil was all alone. He didn't notice his men disappeared secretly one-by-one.
 
Like classical stories, Cecil started feeling the presence of something following him. He started walking cautiously, ready to strike at any moment. As the danger feeling started to expand in Cecil's heart, he began to haste in his walk. First secretly, now openly, some shadows causing weird noises started to appear. Cecil felt in grave danger so he rushed his path not knowing where he will end.
 
After more than half an hour of running from shadows and hisses, (Not really hisses. Just being poetic) he reached a cave garnished by inhuman signs and shapes. As he entered, the cave was more than bright. Even though it's sunlight in the outside, light cannot enter so deep in the cave. By the steps, he started getting deeper and deeper. The surface began to be even smoother and softer. And surprisingly light still entered the cave without a problem.
 
Glass. The whole cave was made of glass. A fact that made Cecil even more uncomfortable. The cave started to branch after some time, but it seemed all the sides were shut by glass besides one path out of the several that appears. It appeared he was lured into a trap. Definitely a trap. But he had no choice but to walk in the assigned paths.
 
When he entered into what seemed almost the end, some weird, familiar noises were able to be heard. The voices were Cecil's man with no doubt. He rushed his path into the endless glass maze as he followed his men's voices with fear and anxiety, yet without hesitation as he needs to help his men. When he finally reached the end, he was amazed by the scene in front of him.
 
Cecil's men were all hanged on the gem-embedded walls with what seems dark diamonds or gems of some sort. Their pain screams made Cecil even more terrified, but he needed to keep his calm for the sake of his men. Swords, magical abilities, even reckless moves didn't help free his men. He tried everything that's possible, but he wasn't able to free his men by whatever means he could.
 
As he started to give up, loud creaks and screams could be heard echoing through the walls. He rushed through the linear path to reach an end with dark auras covering the place. The place was filled with negative energy, it was too dim with evil darkness. As he started walking, the area around him was too cold. Suddenly, out of nowhere, something had caught his legs. Cecil jumped to free his legs and the thing made an uproar that could make anything deaf.
 
As the monster revealed itself finally, the whole place finally illuminated. The place was filled with skeletons stuck in the walls for what seemed thousands of years. Cecil couldn't have the time to observe the scene as he had a monster standing right in front of him. It was a crystalloid monster with tens of tentacles and a face that seemed as just big icicles fused together to form a face without any eyes, mouth, a nose or whatever. Not a basilisk.
 
Cecil could use all his blows and attacks but it wasn't helping. He was too tired and the crystalloid monster was so strong for him to face him alone. He didn't find anything to do but to stall until he is able to figure out the situation. The fight continued for an hour or even more and Cecil started to feel helpless. He couldn't do or think of anything to help him. He could use some healing potions but it was going on waste. He knew nothing is going to help defeat a creature that far surpasses his own abilities.
 
But he had one plan left upon his sleeves. Find the monster's weak point, although he could have done it before. But it was somewhat too hard to do under the circumstances with all the evading to stay alive. He could stall enough until he finds the weak point, but this creature was completely made of gems so a visible weak point was almost impossible to find. The monster kept unleashing attacks on Cecil but Cecil was able to dodge almost all of them, but this was soon about to change. Cecil's stamina was running low and he needs to find something immediately.
 
Shortly, the pain had ended in Cecil's mind. He finally crossed an idea. But the fate of it would cost him his life. Complete annihilation. He could use his last faith now. There's nothing left to do anyways. Call upon his extreme spell to exterminate the whole cave. But that was even useless. He didn't have enough energy to summon it. So what the coco will he do? A twist in actions occurred. The monster took advantage of Cecil being distracted as he struck his hand at Cecil's chest with a tentacle that seemed to shine with the colors of rainbow and black.
 
Cecil's body started to glow, an insignia was being marked on his chest from the blow. An insignia he'd never forget. The monster, surprisingly, and in extreme shock, let Cecil go. Cecil didn't think twice. He quickly ran out of the cave, injured and tired. When he got out, the cave illuminated itself with blinding light. It took several moments of shining light, but the result was more than surprising. The cave itself disappeared. As if it wasn't there in the first moment. No trace of it even seems to exist.
 
He walked his way out, but at near the end he had fallen unconscious. Some soldiers found Cecil and brought him back to the castle's infirmary to heal his wounds. But Cecil didn't feel any better, and his cheast was severly injured. He couldn't sleep the night, and by the hour he started to develop a glowing aura around him. The aura was getting stronger and stronger and everyone was starting to get scared of him.
 
The king himself ordered one of Vidalia's best healers. He summoned Vidalia's highest healer and priest, Priest Epauch. Cecil was in Epauch's hands, but his pain still lingered. Priest Epauch was concocting potion for regaining strength as Cecil's aura was growing bigger. As Cecil drank the potion, it gave him an extreme amount of energy regaining. But the whole energy didn't spread to his body. The energy was transferred to Cecil's chest. Cecil's insignia started glowing so bright as well as his aura.
 
Cecil's body was growing inhumanly and his scream pain would shatter a thousand heart. He was developing a whole new body. Flesh and blood would come out forming a new creature. Cecil expanded and monsterized to become a new creature. He transformed into a demonic monster, destroying everything in its path and moving by the instinct of ruling and destroying everything.
 
Vidalia countered a dark era with bloodshed and destruction under the rule of a monster who slaughtered all the royal family. The people didn't know how they even slept or lived their lives in this misery. The creature didn't want money or anything near items. He wanted power and strength to rule the world and to exterminate everything in his path.
 
But from the darkness, there are always heroes to emerge. 9 heroes rose to fight the evil and restore harmony. They formed the Order of Vidalia; heroes who protect the peace and the lives of people. The head leader was one of Cecil's cousins, Dimantio Pendragon. As the heroes stormed the castle where Cecil takes his throne, they diminished him with supreme spells which took years to make, but the results were more than pleasing.
 
Because Cecil's body was completely now made of magic, he couldn't be destroyed with magic itself. They could only use spells and potions to stall and weaken him enough to banish him. As Cecil's energy was being drained, the 9 heroes took the chance and all focused their magical energy into sealing Cecil into a void with no return. Cecil couldn't fight the vortex, it was too strong and made of pure light magic. He was absorbed into the void as his roar echoed through the walls, promising to return one day as he shot a magical strike at Dimantio.
 
Dimantio survived the blow, as it wasn't as strong as it should be due to the diminishing spells.
 
Ever since, it was a national holiday in Vidalia, made by the new ruler of the country. Dimantio Pendragon. But there was still lots of chaos around Vidalia. The now 8 heroes worked with the king and needed to help restore harmony in the country. Ever since, Vidalia lived in peace and haven't encountered any crises for the enxt 900 years. Until king Valcroy's daughter was born. Donatella Pendragon.
 
Donatella was born in the far north part of North Vidalia. She lives in the sky kingdom part of Vidalia which is surrounded by Vidalia's highest and biggest mountains from below on the ground. As she was already a 2 year old, her magic started forming early and she'd randomly float around the castle while she's sleeping.
 
As Dona became 5 years old, she started developing knighthood and a love for adventure. She'd go out with the other kids in the royal palace and imagine they're heroes fighting the evil and saving others. She has since then started developing love for knighthood and wished when she grows she'd be a royal knight protecting her people. When Donatella hit her 7th year, she fell gravely ill after several days of her birthday. She had high fever and she couldn't leave her bed or bother opening her eyes.
 
All the castle was worried about her, but nothing could be done but to pray for her. After some time, Donatella's body started to glow. Her parents were crying of fear in the scene, worried something will happen to her. After the glow slowly fainted, it started to disappear slowly, focusing to return back to her body from her left hand. The light disappeared in her left hand, painting an insignia in her left hand.
 
Her parents called upon the best mage in whole of Vidalia to inspect her insignia. A classical theme as what happened with Cecil. The mage did heavy research and lots of reading and praying to discover how did the sign appear on Dona's hand. The mage, enthusiastic yet tired of the enormous amount of work he did, rushed to King Valcroy to tell him about his discovery.
 
The mage stated that the insignia is the remains of Dimantio Pendragon's insignia that emerged from Cecil's blow for him. He concludes that Dona will inherit great powers from her ancestors when she grows and she'll grow out to be one of Vidalia's best heroes and the illness she had was nothing but normal with her current circumstances.
 
The mage didn't know how right he was as Donatella grew up to be a very skillfull fighter in terms of battle and magic. When Donatella became 16, her destiny had been clearly visible. A grave danger faces Vidalia. Chaos started emerging around the corners of Vidalia. Acts of dark magic and news of evil creatures destroying and planting terror in people's hearts.
 
Donatella, being extreme yet young, was allowed with troops of knights to examine the weird acts of evil. As she reached the far parts of the country, demons of magic started attacking her and the troops. There was a formidable amount of the demons, but Donatella and the troops managed to defeat them as they were easy to kill.
 
As she was starting to head back to the castle, faint cries could be heard from near. Dona dismissed the troops a little so she could follow the source of the sound. Donatella approached carefully to the debris piled up from the sound source wondering what is behind making this noise. A lost, small brightly colored swan was crying faintly is what Dona observed. Donatella took the swan in her hands to make her feel warm and safe. The swan appeared to lost its family in all the fights.
 
Dona took pity of the swan and decided to adopt it. As she went to the troops and rode on her dragon (Yes, dragon. It was 2003 when she was 16 and this world is obviously more technologically expanded than Earth and it's full of mythical creatures) to the way back to the castle. Over the years, Dona and her pet which she named Cresselia have now become a great deal of friends not to mention Cresselia's ability to transform into a magnificent phoenix.
 
After some time from the evil creatures' incident, things have been easy and peaceful for some time. But these creatures started appearing once again terrorizing people across Vidalia. This time, Dona went with a bigger troop and called upon two of Vidalia's best trainees, and also her friends. The twin brother and sister Porom and Porra. The light and dark mages.
 
Once they were all set to go, Donatella started to have some weird visions; unclear ones. She got a slight headache but she nodded to relief the others. The visions are blurred and some weird paintings and writings appear but it was too early to tell what they were yet. As the time passed and the warriors were close to their destination to the small village of Tyrion, Dona was being somewhat still shaken from her visions. She didn't tell anyone yet, but her swan partner, who now is a dear friend, could sense what she is feeling somewhat, but yet Cresselia also remained silent.
 
When they finally arrived, the whole village was on chaos. They weren't very late, as the demons were chasing people and the fires didn't yet eat away the whole village. The twins were the first to move, they started with their full power to protect the people. Cresselia, still young, was hiding a little with Dona. The troops moved to aid in the battle and some other healers were in the battle to help too.
 
Dona was somewhat frozen in her place. She was having unusual visions once she saw the village burning down. All she could see or hear are some tiles in a fixed pattern shaping something graceful and huge with some music echoing in her ears. Cresselia tried biting Dona a little but she was in somewhat of a trance. Her eyes were colorless and her face was looking pale. Porom and Porra noticed Dona and how she was paralyzed in her place but they were too busy in the battle to be able to even move from their spots.
 
Donatella was sitting on her dragon for some time now, she was an easy target. Several demons noticed how she didn't budge so they claimed their chance to attack Dona. They were very fast and moving in shadows but Donatella didn't notice anything and her dragon was very afraid but it couldn't do anything without orders. Right when the demons were to strike, a shield formed around Donatella protecting her from incoming attacks. Some troops noticed her and thought she was doing this as a trap, while others, such as the twins, knew something was off.
 
From Dona's pocket emerged her swan. Her swan formed the shield around her companion to protect her from the demons. It was a magical swan after all. Explains how she lived during the massive slaughter where she was found. Shortly, after the demons gave up, Dona started moving. Everyone thought she is fine now but it was total opposite. She was unconsciously moving and killing everything in her path. She even didn't notice she was about to hurt some villagers. Porom ran into her but he made a mistake by that. Donatella rose her sword and was about to unleash an attack on him.
 
Once he was in her target and she was about to unleash her attack, Porrom's sister Porra was running toward him to help. But it wasn't necessary. Dona fell unconscious on the ground but Porra was just in time to create a magical lift to prevent her from falling. Everyone got distracted by Dona that they forgot about the battle. Demons took the chance and killed several men while everyone was so busy.
 
Porrom needed to go back to his spot immediately; Porra was now with Dona to help. The demons had finally decreased in amount after some time, thus gaining the troops extra strength to continue. But in the heat of the moment, hundreds of other creatures emerged to aid the demons in the battle.
 
Winged creatures, goblins, trolls, and all sorts of evil creatures. The troops fought with all their powers but it wasn't enough. They were outnumbered and they needed more help immediately; so several men were set out to bring aid hoping they'd return back quickly. Dona was now too heavy to be carried, so Porra hopped on Donatella's dragon, driving it away from all the commotion to a safe place.
 
Following Porra come the other retreating fleets. They all headed to the east of the city. There are some caves found there and that is where the troops are heading to reorganize and wait for help. By the time they all fled to there, Dona was still in a trance in herself. She didn't budge nor show any sign of being awake. Some of the priests that were engaging in combat were to be asked to examine Donatella.
 
Several priests tried to help her, but their magic wasn't enough. There was something hidden. Something blocking them. As if something was protecting her from the inside. The priests couldn't tell though, but one trainee priest, Darlene, had suggested this theory because when she tried to help, she did feel some sort of warmth and comfort emerging from Dona. But she was yet a 15 year old child. She was still learning. Who could believe her? She was ignored, yet Darlene still believed something intentionally did this for Dona, and it was for a better good.
 
Soon, Dona's insignia started to glow. It glows brightly in red, and then the color illuminates the whole cave they're in for seconds. The light was so bright it made the enemy monsters easily locate them. They had all to run escaping into a new place before the monsters arrive. So they all ran venturing deep into the cave hoping the monsters wouldn't follow them. As they walked deeper the place started to feel colder and weirder. They kept walking until the place started to feel slippery.
 
As one of the priests lighted a small light orb to shed light on the place, and to their surprise the place was made of glass. (Seems familiar :3? But no, it's a different cave) They were all stressed from the fact the cave was glass as they walked even deeper. As they started walking even more, Dona's insginia started glowing. It started to glow in varying colors every second and it glowed even more the more they walked.
 
Darlene felt sad for how Dona looked, her face was looking pale and frowning and nobody knows why the insignia is glowing. The insignia started to glow and started to radiate some hear. They all feared it might burn Donatella if the insignia kept on shining on her skin in such vigorous method. Soon, the glass cave seemed to end as some light have entered the cave. They all rushed to the exit hoping to finally exit this dim and miserable place.
 
As they all rushed, the cave ended into a panroma they all gazed at. They were all back in the entrance of the cave, and night have already fell. What seemed they walked of less than an hour was actually lots of hours unsensed. But one of the people in the group shrieked when they were all out. Donatella was missing. She was back at the cave and they needed to rescue her. They all rushed to try to enter but the cave entrance was blocked by an invisible force field. A knight tried to touch it but his finger got a burn over it and he needed to heal it.
 
On the other side, Donatella wasn't at the cave at all. She was at the space illuminated with light they exited from. She is now awake. She asked herself countless questions about where is she as she woke up. A mysterious figure seemingly only made of light approaches Donatella. As the figure speaks, it welcomes Donatella into the Shrine of Light. Where the center of the elder Vidalians who helped the Four Great Dragons creating the world reside. The figure speaks as it explains its intentions.
 
The figure speaks in a manner of fear and calm as it explains to Dona her task. The only thing the figure tells Donatella is that she is bestowed upon greatly hidden powers in her insignia. She must collect the legendary weapons hidden in the universe as a task of proving she's worthy of the insignia. Of course, Dona didn't have a choice. The insignia is what gave her her powers and made her boosted in everything out of people.
 
If she ever let out these blessings (which she was because she didn't want to venture the whole cosmos) the whole world would start to fall apart because if the insignia disappears, the whole world will disappear as we know it. The figure explains that these insignia are given to heroic people to be held worthy of having them to protect the world from being shaken and falling apart. To do this though, the insignia must be accompanied with the legendary Weapons of Life to balance out its power.
 
But the question remains is how will Donatella ever find them? The answer is simple. She will be given a Soul Shard. Every Life Weapon is made out of many fragments, but the Soul Shard is the main block piece of every Life Weapon. Thus it can sense when a Life Weapon is being activated. This is why Dona was spoken of it now. The Life Weapons are just about to start activating themselves after countless millenias.
 
The insignia's true power starts emerging at the same time too, so the weapon must be found quickly or her world will be shaken.
The soul shard transforms into a necklace around her in the shape of a purple pendant engraved with a red jewel. Whenever a weapon's power is activated, the necklace should glow. Dona doesn't have a chance but to agree unless she wants her planet to tremble.
 
The place she's in glows brighter before she can say a word and she's immediately transported back to her friends. They all run to her to wonder if she's hurt or anything. She didn't last a minute as she faints back again. They all carry her back to the castle as they pack, marking defeat and failure of their mission. When they're in the castle in the next day, Dona gathers her friends and the meaning people to tell them about the mission she was given. Failure isn't an option. They must act immediately and solve the mystery of the uprising of monsters first.
 
They all pack once again to go to Bloodfang Valley; a deserted canyon known to contain one of Vidalia's wisest elders. The Lycanmarsh. They are blind, immortal wise monks that existed upon the creation of Vidalia. They set on to go, but they insist for Donatella to rest and wait them. Born stubborn, Dona refuses and rebels as she heads out with them anyways. The place wasn't too hard to find, but definitely not an easy or a short journey.
 
The path lies after Vidalia's biggest desert; Kaymo Desert.
They crossed the desert after a week of struggling and fighting the fiery weather and environment of the desert. When they reached their destination, Dona was greeted the welcoming of the expected. They knew she was coming. They explain to her that the uprising of the monsters is caused by the return of something evil that sensed the reawakening of the weapons. The Lycanmarsh explain to Donatella that she must try to protect the her country from the demons.
 
If her world is conquered, it will be more than easy for the evil to claim the weapons. If the weapons fall in the wrong hand, the whole universe will tremble for the new holder. Though, that's not all. The Lycanmarsh explain that this task may take many years to be accomplished. Dona might even have reached the end of her life and all the weapons aren't collected yet. If so, the insginia will be passed later into a new holder.
 
Several days pass, and Dona's necklace finally glows. It automatically makes Dona sense where the weapon is and what it's called. The first part of the weapon set is the Auguric Sword. It is found in Vidalia too. That is considered very near compared to the distance of each weapon apart (because they're scattered around the universe not her planet only).
 
The place she senses is near the Isles of Tundra. They are basically several islands covered completely with ice that are found in the South of Vidalia. They all packed up and prepared to leave, even Dona. They tried to make her stay and rest, but she was too stubborn and rebelious to listen. Reasoning didn't work with her so she went with them anyways. As they were set going, Donatella's pendant started glowing again faintly for a while. Probably sensing the weapon again. 

Once they were in the biggest and main island, their path seemed so scattered yet Donatella was able to lead them easily. Though, after some moments, some bushes started shaking violently and calming every moment as they walk. The creatures didn't wait the element of surprise and bashed at them, mainly at Dona. They were some ice bats with red eyes glowing as blood. 
 
They were easy to dispose off quickly, but that wasn't only it. As they kept walking, small amounts yet of many different creatures kept popping out of nowhere to attack them. All sorts of ice-regioned creatures kept coming. Goblins, ice beetles, tiny imps, even some little dragons breathing ice. They all were easy to kill but this was too much hastle and they kept overflowing in larger quantities. 

They had to ditch them out and look for the weapon for now. They were late from all the crazy creatures that kept popping. It's like as if they were being created at the same time one is defeated. The paths eventually lead into a big mountain covered completely with ice. The first steps of the mountain are drawn with some stairs branching into many different caves. Donatella's necklace lead the way as usual and they stumbled upon a wall which was covered with some magneficint paintings.

The wind carved icicle shapes and amazing bending of ice on this side of the mountain that it can be thought of more like a museum made entirely out of ice. The drawings show pictures of some weapons connected together in a podium and suddenly seperated around the world. The following pictures show the looks of each weapon seperately without any details or hints of their places, but the only weapon that is said where it is looks like a sword. Donatella argues it might be the Auguric Sword they're looking for, and the necklace all this time was leading them here.

She observes the drawings in the area of the sword on the wall and notices some weird patterns. There are some stars and wave drawings on top of each other. The sword is shown shining some sort of a light or a ray at the area and it shows the stars reflect it in the shape of a star in the sky. The drawing was simple yet the riddle wasn't understood. What could that mean?

The sword isn't here since the first place! Exclaimed one of her friends. It was Darlene. She says she had always read about a lot of history and geography of Vidalia and she knows enough to say that an island as much as the importance of the stars in the sky can only be found somewhere else. It's called the Birthstar Island. It's another massive island found far from south of Vidalia where legends say stars in the skies of Vidalia were created in that exact same island. And everyday, the island which is shaped as a star would glow in all area of it and shoot countless stars in the sky, forming amazing scenes of light playing between in the universe.

They can't waste anymore time. They immediately head to their kingdom and plan a ship prepared to to Birthstar island, the island where legends say stars are born. Donatella's neckalce glows even brighter than it was the more they go there. In their traveling path though, Donatella was wondering what would happen to her future. Would she be tied to all this forever? Will she ever find all the weapons before the insignia she herself holds destroy the world? She couldn't find answers. She needed to find them.

When Donatella was going to sleep, she noticed some noise from her bed blanket. Removing it quickly, she notices Cresselia, her faithful companion came with her. She couldn't possibly return her back can she now? She shakes her head as she heads to sleep with her tiny little baby swan next to her. Upon the morning, they almost reached their destination. So far they traveled a long distance. Several hours later, they have landed on Birthstar island. Dona's necklace didn't glow yet. The weapon must be hidden then somewhere. Walking a little more, Darlene suggests the weapon might be classically in the middle, so it's wise to walk straight.

Of course, nothing was easy. Birds of flame roamed on top and started throwing lava rocks of some sort at them, burning everything in their way to ashes instead of fire. Dona tries to run and protect her baby swan at the same time with her friends. More dangers appears in front of her. Slime monsters, and fast too emerge from the bottom of the land as they attack some of their friends. Everyone runs in several directions and splits up running or attacking unnoticing the others.

Donatella was alone chased by a slime monster and she couldn't attack the monster because she needed to protect her little friend between her hands. Eventually she loses the monster as she climbs a tree awaiting him to begone. After sometime, she dismounts of the tree ready with her friend trying to determine the path. The wind blows a little, eventually causing her necklace to glow. The glow wasn't as comfortable as it was before, it felt a little...scared or something.

As Donatella kept walking with her pet, she reached an end part of a waterfall. The necklace though, kept glowing. She theorized there might be some sort of an entrance behind the waterfall. She tried to enter from the side to prevent water on her from falling as much as possible on her. The cave seems to be connected with a panel of airways, she can see light from caves that seem to have openings on the top of this hill. The necklace leads her deeper and deeper until she reaches out a room in a small shrine that contains a glow; floating on it is the Auguric Sword.

She doesn't hesitate a moment and takes it. An overflow of positive energy flows through Dona, refreshing and soothing her out. That didn't last long though, the place started to tremble. She runs with her little baby swan from the other exit which leads them quickly out of the shrine that trembles and falls into pieces; collapsing and closing the entrance. She sighs a relief this was all over. But she has got to find her friends now.

The necklace, glows even harder, almost leaving Donatella's necklace. Dona is forced to run to be able to keep up with the necklace that decided to pull her. She ends up back to the ship. Is the necklace telling her to leave quickly and leave her friends? Donatella couldn't do it. She needed to find her friends and quickly! But it seems something else found her instead. A winged demon from coco appeared out of nowhere.

The creature welcomes itself as Ahriman. He is his "master's" right hand. Classically, he says he's afraid he might need the sword. Dona obviously refused to do it. Ahriman snaps out his fingers and sudden glowing auras in the sky appear. Her friends appear out of them stuck in magical chains that won't allow them to budge. Dona is choiced either her friends or the sword. She couldn't choose between the lives of her country or her friends.

Unexpectingly, her baby swan jumps at Ahriman and tries to knock him out. The attack didn't even tickle the monster. She was too young to fight. The demon threw a flaming ball at the swan, throwing her on the ground of the shore. Donatella got overflowing anger at her as she took the Auguric Sword and slashed the monster with it. Ahriman was angry and decided to unleash his full-mode at Dona from the very beginning. Donatella wasn't prepared to fight a legendary demon all by herself, even with a Life weapon.

Trying to block his attacks with her sword, (the sword is so strong it can do that) her pet suddenly opens its eyes to see Dona fighting for her, thinking Cresselia is dead. The baby swan wakes up, glowing brilliantley around her that Dona and Ahriman couldn't help but notice. Cresselia flew in the air a little and she illuminated her surroundings as she started glowing even brighter. In the end of the moment, she released a massive amount of energy in the form of light, to emerge as nothing but a colored phoenix dazzling the sky around her.

Donatella's mouth opened in surprise. She tried to close it but she couldn't. She was afraid her brain might just fall out! The phoenix's glory was enough to grow hate and fear in Ahriman's heart that he didn't have a thing to do but strike the bird with all its might. Cresselia was no match. With a delicate swing from her wings she created a magical thunderbolt that struck Ahriman with the rages of a thousand God. 

Of course, Ahriman was far stronger to die now. But he didn't give up. He pierced the wind to attack again, releasing enchanted flames and attacks never seen of before. Cresselia defended herself from the attacks, blocking his attacks with ease. Donatella didn't waste the chance. She took out the chance and climbed quickly a small hill as she jumped with all her might to strike Ahriman with her brand new fierce sword. Ahriman took a massive blow from the back and Cresselia took the chance and attacked from the front and threw a magical fireball at her opponent.

Defeated, yet not lost, Ahriman retreats the arena. Cresselia's power shrink quickly as she returns back to her little swan form. Donatella jumped back and caught her little tired swan. The mission was fulfilled to its zenith. They got the sword, they defeated Ahriman, and her swan unleashed its full hidden potential power. But something amazing occurs. Dona gains a new set of wings behind her back. She have gained a magical new look she can use to transform. She gains boosted powers and wings to help her fly.

Time skips back to the castle. They are all healed and full. The swan can now no longer get back to her phoenix form. It was a power never seen again.

The Auguric sword was now in the hands of a new master since endless centuries. Its full power is yet to be released. Donatella departs herself to the sage of the castle, Priest Dremstin. She asks him for the guiadance of who could be their danger known as Ahriman. He tells her the story of Cecil Pendragon and how he made everyone fear him (Scroll up to remember his story). His right hand was Ahriman, the master of darkness. 

Ahriman's powers were no match for Cecil so he had no choice but to be his minion. With privelages. Cecil has always been present in our future and checking every corner, even if he's trapped in another universe. He cannot escape, yet somehow, somewhere, he made his minion escape there to bring him the sword. The sage suspects Cecil's aim is to take the sword and get freed from his eternal prison. They must gather the Life weapon before Cecil escapes or chaos will be fallen.

Dona's friends, who have been overhearing all the time, suddenly enter and all draw they're ready for this. The question of how they knew is answered by the looks in their eyes. But that's not important. They all swear to fight for the sake of Vidalia and its people.

After 10 years, Dona's necklace finally shines. It has been forever since this happened. Dona's strength and abilities are far more able than before by now. They don't waste a moment. They all set to where she senses the next weapon is. The Sperion Defense shield. It's located somewhere in the seas of Western Vidalia. The deepest ocean is located there. They head out immediately.

Once they were in the right destination, the sea under them starts to tremble. The water flows up and down as a sea creature emerges its shadows from the depth. A mysterious kraken appears from below striking the ship straight. Dona strikes and jumps to attack the creature, injuring him a little. Her friends help and heal as they attack that monster. They set into a fight that is won easily. Maybe too easily for a kraken.

Once that is over, they're casted a spell to breath underwater by her friend Darlene. As they reach below, they encounter several sharks. Several magical attacks from Dona's sword defeat them easily. The shield is located in Dona's eyes. She swims thoroughly at it. As she places her hands on it, a tentacle wraps her arm as it scraps Dona out of her place. They have a small fight to break her hand but she successes in the end. Once she's there, the kraken, which is back again, releases a faint cry from a small blow Dona released. 

The kraken speaks. It's one of Cecil's minions. It wants to end Dona right here and there and take both weapons from her. Dona's friends arrive. They all team up to attack with her the Kraken as it releases swirls and attacks preventing them from approaching. But something else happens above the surface. Dona's swan, which now can easily transform into the phoenix anytime she wants, helps by attacking from above to strike the kraken with several bolts. The monster had enough from this small fight.

Its temper is too short. It opens a portal in the sea swirling everything in its path. Dona strifes to catch a rock to prevent falling as her friends do too. The vortex is too strong and Dona is sucked right through it. Dona's transformation fades. Her powers feel weak. Her sword is still with her though.

She falls in another universe. Present time, Earth. Townsville city is where she is now. She is lost. She don't know anyone. She doesn't know anything. The place seems less technologically developed than her world. The sword can be summoned anytime though still. But it lost a lot of its power. It seems Vidalia is what kept their powers strongers. The place where it was created is where its source power comes from. 

Her magic took a different form. She is doing some ice magic...but nothing enough. Most of her powers are coming from her sword now. She is yet to figure how to return to her world and find her friends. She has nothing to do now. She is lost and needs to find help.
  
Miscellaneous: Her hair sometimes tangles around her or completely blocks her vision. Her favorite food is, untraditionally for royalty, burgers. Her favorite color is lime green. When she is bored, she has a habit of using her imagination to start imagining thrilling events (most of the time leading to more than 10 vases broken to pieces). Secretly, she sometimes dreams to be able to give up all her wealth and live the harsh life of adventures and heroism.

She plays the harp very well and her swordsmanship abilities are outstanding. She is also a great leader and has the gifted talent of singing.

Her companion is an ice-blue and dark turquoise female named Cresselia with the ability to turn into an enormous phoenix mainly colored brilliantly with purple, red, light blue, and other color hues balanced with each other. She is a really picky eater, likes playing pranks, very neat, and a faithful, friendly companion. Cresselia also has a habit of chasing herself when nobody is around, along with other secret habits such as eavesdropping at others.

Short History:

Dona grew up in the castle as a kid with a nice happy sense of justice. She always dreamed of being a big heroine one day. One day, she got very ill and feel in somewhat of a coma for 3 weeks. her heat was high that she couldn't move. After a while, she woke up with an insignia in her hands. When she was wide awake, she was told that these insignia are for the heroes supposed to protect Vidalia and how the whole world depends on them. 

Once she was 16, she went with her friends and some castle troops to defend villagers of an attack. Once they were there, they all fought fiercely but Dona froze in her place. They couldn't win without her and they took Dona and ran to nearby caves. Once they paced through it Dona was lost in the cave. She was taken into a cave by an elder who protects the weapon of Life. 

She was told she must collect these weapon that grant great power to its holder or else the world will tremble. The new uprising time for the weapon starts soon and she must collect them because she's the holder of an insignia. He gave her a necklace that would glow once a Life weapon is activated.

Once she got out, she told her friends her mission and they all agreed to go for it. But a weird cry was heard near. Dona went near it and approached to see a small needy swan. She took pity of it and decided to adopt it. Some time later, her necklace started to glow. It was to a frozen place she'd discover. Once she was there, they climbed a mountain to find a clue of the next weapon. They searched and found paintings on the wall that tells of the place. Birthstar island. They headed there and searched for it without luck.

Soon, monsters attacked them out of nowhere and they got separated from each other. She tried running and hitting at same time to protect her swan partner. She eventually walked and found the weapon inside a cave. The cave started to tremble as she got out. But she made it in time. Once she was out, a demon appeared clarifying himself as Ahriman. He told her he wants the weapon or he'll kill her friends that are with him. Her pet swan then evolved into a giant phoenix. It attacked Ahriman with lots of blows and defeated it.

Once this was over, they all returned to their home. They were told this demon wants to help revive his master Cecil to rule Vidalia again. Time passes after 10 years as they discover another weapon in the sea. As they head to the ocean, they're attacked by a Kraken that almost destroyed the ship but they defeated him. Once he was over (pretty quickly too) a spell was cast on them to breath underwater. Once Dona spot the weapon, she swam quickly for it. But it appears the kraken was already waiting. He fought her a little before opening a leap through time causing a vortex to open sucking her into present time Earth.

She is now lost and needs to find anything to help her return.

Do you use Nanos: No.


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Re: Donatella Pendragon

Post  techee on Fri Jan 17, 2014 7:20 pm

To start, it is long. From what I read from her history, it is very fleshed out. I think that everything was spot on with a few errors in the history, mostly spelling, but I will not critique that stuff. I like how you added in a miscellaneous section. It added more depth to your character. She looks like she'll be good for any fight against Fuse's minions and Fusions with abilities like that. Another thing I like is how you made her in an actual character with true strengths and weaknesses. I like how you made her sweet, we always need sweet characters around in the RP. When I mean sweet, I mean the part of her personality where she is willing to sacrifice herself and has a kind heart. It also looks like she can be quite adventurous, another thing I think is needed in the RP. Your character, overall, is really good and I am quite impressed by what you did. There is nothing bad in there. It was all basically good. So, I got to say that I accept her. You got a few more accepts before she can make it in.
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Re: Donatella Pendragon

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Fri Jan 17, 2014 8:55 pm

Hikari-Chan wrote:Besides school though.

Is she still in school?
 
Date of Birth (Year is not necessary): Friday, December 18th 1987.

She'd be 59 since we're in the year 2047.
  
History: 

Spoiler:
Cecil Pendragon, the head royal guard in Vidalia, was once wandering around the forest of Northern Vidalia with troops of the royal guards. There have been rumors of a winged basilisk roaming and causing terror all over Vidalia and it have been traced and finally found to be centering in the Crimson Forest. The leaves and the trunks and even the grass are all colored in the shades of red and orange.
 
Myths say that once the four dragons that created the universe had a fiery bloodshed with each other which caused their splattering blood to spread among the forest; eternally coloring everything in red.
 
As he approached deeper in the forest, strange things started to occur. Several of Cecil's men disappeared without any sign of warning. The paths started to look the same and the road started to feel like an endless journey. Soon, Cecil was all alone. He didn't notice his men disappeared secretly one-by-one.
 
Like classical stories, Cecil started feeling the presence of something following him. He started walking cautiously, ready to strike at any moment. As the danger feeling started to expand in Cecil's heart, he began to haste in his walk. First secretly, now openly, some shadows causing weird noises started to appear. Cecil felt in grave danger so he rushed his path not knowing where he will end.
 
After more than half an hour of running from shadows and hisses, (Not really hisses. Just being poetic) he reached a cave garnished by inhuman signs and shapes. As he entered, the cave was more than bright. Even though it's sunlight in the outside, light cannot enter so deep in the cave. By the steps, he started getting deeper and deeper. The surface began to be even smoother and softer. And surprisingly light still entered the cave without a problem.
 
Glass. The whole cave was made of glass. A fact that made Cecil even more uncomfortable. The cave started to branch after some time, but it seemed all the sides were shut by glass besides one path out of the several that appears. It appeared he was lured into a trap. Definitely a trap. But he had no choice but to walk in the assigned paths.
 
When he entered into what seemed almost the end, some weird, familiar noises were able to be heard. The voices were Cecil's man with no doubt. He rushed his path into the endless glass maze as he followed his men's voices with fear and anxiety, yet without hesitation as he needs to help his men. When he finally reached the end, he was amazed by the scene in front of him.
 
Cecil's men were all hanged on the gem-embedded walls with what seems dark diamonds or gems of some sort. Their pain screams made Cecil even more terrified, but he needed to keep his calm for the sake of his men. Swords, magical abilities, even reckless moves didn't help free his men. He tried everything that's possible, but he wasn't able to free his men by whatever means he could.
 
As he started to give up, loud creaks and screams could be heard echoing through the walls. He rushed through the linear path to reach an end with dark auras covering the place. The place was filled with negative energy, it was too dim with evil darkness. As he started walking, the area around him was too cold. Suddenly, out of nowhere, something had caught his legs. Cecil jumped to free his legs and the thing made an uproar that could make anything deaf.
 
As the monster revealed itself finally, the whole place finally illuminated. The place was filled with skeletons stuck in the walls for what seemed thousands of years. Cecil couldn't have the time to observe the scene as he had a monster standing right in front of him. It was a crystalloid monster with tens of tentacles and a face that seemed as just big icicles fused together to form a face without any eyes, mouth, a nose or whatever. Not a basilisk.
 
Cecil could use all his blows and attacks but it wasn't helping. He was too tired and the crystalloid monster was so strong for him to face him alone. He didn't find anything to do but to stall until he is able to figure out the situation. The fight continued for an hour or even more and Cecil started to feel helpless. He couldn't do or think of anything to help him. He could use some healing potions but it was going on waste. He knew nothing is going to help defeat a creature that far surpasses his own abilities.
 
But he had one plan left upon his sleeves. Find the monster's weak point, although he could have done it before. But it was somewhat too hard to do under the circumstances with all the evading to stay alive. He could stall enough until he finds the weak point, but this creature was completely made of gems so a visible weak point was almost impossible to find. The monster kept unleashing attacks on Cecil but Cecil was able to dodge almost all of them, but this was soon about to change. Cecil's stamina was running low and he needs to find something immediately.
 
Shortly, the pain had ended in Cecil's mind. He finally crossed an idea. But the fate of it would cost him his life. Complete annihilation. He could use his last faith now. There's nothing left to do anyways. Call upon his extreme spell to exterminate the whole cave. But that was even useless. He didn't have enough energy to summon it. So what the coco will he do? A twist in actions occurred. The monster took advantage of Cecil being distracted as he struck his hand at Cecil's chest with a tentacle that seemed to shine with the colors of rainbow and black.
 
Cecil's body started to glow, an insignia was being marked on his chest from the blow. An insignia he'd never forget. The monster, surprisingly, and in extreme shock, let Cecil go. Cecil didn't think twice. He quickly ran out of the cave, injured and tired. When he got out, the cave illuminated itself with blinding light. It took several moments of shining light, but the result was more than surprising. The cave itself disappeared. As if it wasn't there in the first moment. No trace of it even seems to exist.
 
He walked his way out, but at near the end he had fallen unconscious. Some soldiers found Cecil and brought him back to the castle's infirmary to heal his wounds. But Cecil didn't feel any better, and his cheast was severly injured. He couldn't sleep the night, and by the hour he started to develop a glowing aura around him. The aura was getting stronger and stronger and everyone was starting to get scared of him.
 
The king himself ordered one of Vidalia's best healers. He summoned Vidalia's highest healer and priest, Priest Epauch. Cecil was in Epauch's hands, but his pain still lingered. Priest Epauch was concocting potion for regaining strength as Cecil's aura was growing bigger. As Cecil drank the potion, it gave him an extreme amount of energy regaining. But the whole energy didn't spread to his body. The energy was transferred to Cecil's chest. Cecil's insignia started glowing so bright as well as his aura.
 
Cecil's body was growing inhumanly and his scream pain would shatter a thousand heart. He was developing a whole new body. Flesh and blood would come out forming a new creature. Cecil expanded and monsterized to become a new creature. He transformed into a demonic monster, destroying everything in its path and moving by the instinct of ruling and destroying everything.
 
Vidalia countered a dark era with bloodshed and destruction under the rule of a monster who slaughtered all the royal family. The people didn't know how they even slept or lived their lives in this misery. The creature didn't want money or anything near items. He wanted power and strength to rule the world and to exterminate everything in his path.
 
But from the darkness, there are always heroes to emerge. 9 heroes rose to fight the evil and restore harmony. They formed the Order of Vidalia; heroes who protect the peace and the lives of people. The head leader was one of Cecil's cousins, Dimantio Pendragon. As the heroes stormed the castle where Cecil takes his throne, they diminished him with supreme spells which took years to make, but the results were more than pleasing.
 
Because Cecil's body was completely now made of magic, he couldn't be destroyed with magic itself. They could only use spells and potions to stall and weaken him enough to banish him. As Cecil's energy was being drained, the 9 heroes took the chance and all focused their magical energy into sealing Cecil into a void with no return. Cecil couldn't fight the vortex, it was too strong and made of pure light magic. He was absorbed into the void as his roar echoed through the walls, promising to return one day as he shot a magical strike at Dimantio.
 
Dimantio survived the blow, as it wasn't as strong as it should be due to the diminishing spells.
 
Ever since, it was a national holiday in Vidalia, made by the new ruler of the country. Dimantio Pendragon. But there was still lots of chaos around Vidalia. The now 8 heroes worked with the king and needed to help restore harmony in the country. Ever since, Vidalia lived in peace and haven't encountered any crises for the enxt 900 years. Until king Valcroy's daughter was born. Donatella Pendragon.
 
Donatella was born in the far north part of North Vidalia. She lives in the sky kingdom part of Vidalia which is surrounded by Vidalia's highest and biggest mountains from below on the ground. As she was already a 2 year old, her magic started forming early and she'd randomly float around the castle while she's sleeping.
 
As Dona became 5 years old, she started developing knighthood and a love for adventure. She'd go out with the other kids in the royal palace and imagine they're heroes fighting the evil and saving others. She has since then started developing love for knighthood and wished when she grows she'd be a royal knight protecting her people. When Donatella hit her 7th year, she fell gravely ill after several days of her birthday. She had high fever and she couldn't leave her bed or bother opening her eyes.
 
All the castle was worried about her, but nothing could be done but to pray for her. After some time, Donatella's body started to glow. Her parents were crying of fear in the scene, worried something will happen to her. After the glow slowly fainted, it started to disappear slowly, focusing to return back to her body from her left hand. The light disappeared in her left hand, painting an insignia in her left hand.
 
Her parents called upon the best mage in whole of Vidalia to inspect her insignia. A classical theme as what happened with Cecil. The mage did heavy research and lots of reading and praying to discover how did the sign appear on Dona's hand. The mage, enthusiastic yet tired of the enormous amount of work he did, rushed to King Valcroy to tell him about his discovery.
 
The mage stated that the insignia is the remains of Dimantio Pendragon's insignia that emerged from Cecil's blow for him. He concludes that Dona will inherit great powers from her ancestors when she grows and she'll grow out to be one of Vidalia's best heroes and the illness she had was nothing but normal with her current circumstances.
 
The mage didn't know how right he was as Donatella grew up to be a very skillfull fighter in terms of battle and magic. When Donatella became 16, her destiny had been clearly visible. A grave danger faces Vidalia. Chaos started emerging around the corners of Vidalia. Acts of dark magic and news of evil creatures destroying and planting terror in people's hearts.
 
Donatella, being extreme yet young, was allowed with troops of knights to examine the weird acts of evil. As she reached the far parts of the country, demons of magic started attacking her and the troops. There was a formidable amount of the demons, but Donatella and the troops managed to defeat them as they were easy to kill.
 
As she was starting to head back to the castle, faint cries could be heard from near. Dona dismissed the troops a little so she could follow the source of the sound. Donatella approached carefully to the debris piled up from the sound source wondering what is behind making this noise. A lost, small brightly colored swan was crying faintly is what Dona observed. Donatella took the swan in her hands to make her feel warm and safe. The swan appeared to lost its family in all the fights.
 
Dona took pity of the swan and decided to adopt it. As she went to the troops and rode on her dragon (Yes, dragon. It was 2003 when she was 16 and this world is obviously more technologically expanded than Earth and it's full of mythical creatures) to the way back to the castle. Over the years, Dona and her pet which she named Cresselia have now become a great deal of friends not to mention Cresselia's ability to transform into a magnificent phoenix.
 
After some time from the evil creatures' incident, things have been easy and peaceful for some time. But these creatures started appearing once again terrorizing people across Vidalia. This time, Dona went with a bigger troop and called upon two of Vidalia's best trainees, and also her friends. The twin brother and sister Porom and Porra. The light and dark mages.
 
Once they were all set to go, Donatella started to have some weird visions; unclear ones. She got a slight headache but she nodded to relief the others. The visions are blurred and some weird paintings and writings appear but it was too early to tell what they were yet. As the time passed and the warriors were close to their destination to the small village of Tyrion, Dona was being somewhat still shaken from her visions. She didn't tell anyone yet, but her swan partner, who now is a dear friend, could sense what she is feeling somewhat, but yet Cresselia also remained silent.
 
When they finally arrived, the whole village was on chaos. They weren't very late, as the demons were chasing people and the fires didn't yet eat away the whole village. The twins were the first to move, they started with their full power to protect the people. Cresselia, still young, was hiding a little with Dona. The troops moved to aid in the battle and some other healers were in the battle to help too.
 
Dona was somewhat frozen in her place. She was having unusual visions once she saw the village burning down. All she could see or hear are some tiles in a fixed pattern shaping something graceful and huge with some music echoing in her ears. Cresselia tried biting Dona a little but she was in somewhat of a trance. Her eyes were colorless and her face was looking pale. Porom and Porra noticed Dona and how she was paralyzed in her place but they were too busy in the battle to be able to even move from their spots.
 
Donatella was sitting on her dragon for some time now, she was an easy target. Several demons noticed how she didn't budge so they claimed their chance to attack Dona. They were very fast and moving in shadows but Donatella didn't notice anything and her dragon was very afraid but it couldn't do anything without orders. Right when the demons were to strike, a shield formed around Donatella protecting her from incoming attacks. Some troops noticed her and thought she was doing this as a trap, while others, such as the twins, knew something was off.
 
From Dona's pocket emerged her swan. Her swan formed the shield around her companion to protect her from the demons. It was a magical swan after all. Explains how she lived during the massive slaughter where she was found. Shortly, after the demons gave up, Dona started moving. Everyone thought she is fine now but it was total opposite. She was unconsciously moving and killing everything in her path. She even didn't notice she was about to hurt some villagers. Porom ran into her but he made a mistake by that. Donatella rose her sword and was about to unleash an attack on him.
 
Once he was in her target and she was about to unleash her attack, Porrom's sister Porra was running toward him to help. But it wasn't necessary. Dona fell unconscious on the ground but Porra was just in time to create a magical lift to prevent her from falling. Everyone got distracted by Dona that they forgot about the battle. Demons took the chance and killed several men while everyone was so busy.
 
Porrom needed to go back to his spot immediately; Porra was now with Dona to help. The demons had finally decreased in amount after some time, thus gaining the troops extra strength to continue. But in the heat of the moment, hundreds of other creatures emerged to aid the demons in the battle.
 
Winged creatures, goblins, trolls, and all sorts of evil creatures. The troops fought with all their powers but it wasn't enough. They were outnumbered and they needed more help immediately; so several men were set out to bring aid hoping they'd return back quickly. Dona was now too heavy to be carried, so Porra hopped on Donatella's dragon, driving it away from all the commotion to a safe place.
 
Following Porra come the other retreating fleets. They all headed to the east of the city. There are some caves found there and that is where the troops are heading to reorganize and wait for help. By the time they all fled to there, Dona was still in a trance in herself. She didn't budge nor show any sign of being awake. Some of the priests that were engaging in combat were to be asked to examine Donatella.
 
Several priests tried to help her, but their magic wasn't enough. There was something hidden. Something blocking them. As if something was protecting her from the inside. The priests couldn't tell though, but one trainee priest, Darlene, had suggested this theory because when she tried to help, she did feel some sort of warmth and comfort emerging from Dona. But she was yet a 15 year old child. She was still learning. Who could believe her? She was ignored, yet Darlene still believed something intentionally did this for Dona, and it was for a better good.
 
Soon, Dona's insignia started to glow. It glows brightly in red, and then the color illuminates the whole cave they're in for seconds. The light was so bright it made the enemy monsters easily locate them. They had all to run escaping into a new place before the monsters arrive. So they all ran venturing deep into the cave hoping the monsters wouldn't follow them. As they walked deeper the place started to feel colder and weirder. They kept walking until the place started to feel slippery.
 
As one of the priests lighted a small light orb to shed light on the place, and to their surprise the place was made of glass. (Seems familiar :3? But no, it's a different cave) They were all stressed from the fact the cave was glass as they walked even deeper. As they started walking even more, Dona's insginia started glowing. It started to glow in varying colors every second and it glowed even more the more they walked.
 
Darlene felt sad for how Dona looked, her face was looking pale and frowning and nobody knows why the insignia is glowing. The insignia started to glow and started to radiate some hear. They all feared it might burn Donatella if the insignia kept on shining on her skin in such vigorous method. Soon, the glass cave seemed to end as some light have entered the cave. They all rushed to the exit hoping to finally exit this dim and miserable place.
 
As they all rushed, the cave ended into a panroma they all gazed at. They were all back in the entrance of the cave, and night have already fell. What seemed they walked of less than an hour was actually lots of hours unsensed. But one of the people in the group shrieked when they were all out. Donatella was missing. She was back at the cave and they needed to rescue her. They all rushed to try to enter but the cave entrance was blocked by an invisible force field. A knight tried to touch it but his finger got a burn over it and he needed to heal it.
 
On the other side, Donatella wasn't at the cave at all. She was at the space illuminated with light they exited from. She is now awake. She asked herself countless questions about where is she as she woke up. A mysterious figure seemingly only made of light approaches Donatella. As the figure speaks, it welcomes Donatella into the Shrine of Light. Where the center of the elder Vidalians who helped the Four Great Dragons creating the world reside. The figure speaks as it explains its intentions.
 
The figure speaks in a manner of fear and calm as it explains to Dona her task. The only thing the figure tells Donatella is that she is bestowed upon greatly hidden powers in her insignia. She must collect the legendary weapons hidden in the universe as a task of proving she's worthy of the insignia. Of course, Dona didn't have a choice. The insignia is what gave her her powers and made her boosted in everything out of people.
 
If she ever let out these blessings (which she was because she didn't want to venture the whole cosmos) the whole world would start to fall apart because if the insignia disappears, the whole world will disappear as we know it. The figure explains that these insignia are given to heroic people to be held worthy of having them to protect the world from being shaken and falling apart. To do this though, the insignia must be accompanied with the legendary Weapons of Life to balance out its power.
 
But the question remains is how will Donatella ever find them? The answer is simple. She will be given a Soul Shard. Every Life Weapon is made out of many fragments, but the Soul Shard is the main block piece of every Life Weapon. Thus it can sense when a Life Weapon is being activated. This is why Dona was spoken of it now. The Life Weapons are just about to start activating themselves after countless millenias.
 
The insignia's true power starts emerging at the same time too, so the weapon must be found quickly or her world will be shaken.
The soul shard transforms into a necklace around her in the shape of a purple pendant engraved with a red jewel. Whenever a weapon's power is activated, the necklace should glow. Dona doesn't have a chance but to agree unless she wants her planet to tremble.
 
The place she's in glows brighter before she can say a word and she's immediately transported back to her friends. They all run to her to wonder if she's hurt or anything. She didn't last a minute as she faints back again. They all carry her back to the castle as they pack, marking defeat and failure of their mission. When they're in the castle in the next day, Dona gathers her friends and the meaning people to tell them about the mission she was given. Failure isn't an option. They must act immediately and solve the mystery of the uprising of monsters first.
 
They all pack once again to go to Bloodfang Valley; a deserted canyon known to contain one of Vidalia's wisest elders. The Lycanmarsh. They are blind, immortal wise monks that existed upon the creation of Vidalia. They set on to go, but they insist for Donatella to rest and wait them. Born stubborn, Dona refuses and rebels as she heads out with them anyways. The place wasn't too hard to find, but definitely not an easy or a short journey.
 
The path lies after Vidalia's biggest desert; Kaymo Desert.
They crossed the desert after a week of struggling and fighting the fiery weather and environment of the desert. When they reached their destination, Dona was greeted the welcoming of the expected. They knew she was coming. They explain to her that the uprising of the monsters is caused by the return of something evil that sensed the reawakening of the weapons. The Lycanmarsh explain to Donatella that she must try to protect the her country from the demons.
 
If her world is conquered, it will be more than easy for the evil to claim the weapons. If the weapons fall in the wrong hand, the whole universe will tremble for the new holder. Though, that's not all. The Lycanmarsh explain that this task may take many years to be accomplished. Dona might even have reached the end of her life and all the weapons aren't collected yet. If so, the insginia will be passed later into a new holder.
 
Several days pass, and Dona's necklace finally glows. It automatically makes Dona sense where the weapon is and what it's called. The first part of the weapon set is the Auguric Sword. It is found in Vidalia too. That is considered very near compared to the distance of each weapon apart (because they're scattered around the universe not her planet only).
 
The place she senses is near the Isles of Tundra. They are basically several islands covered completely with ice that are found in the South of Vidalia. They all packed up and prepared to leave, even Dona. They tried to make her stay and rest, but she was too stubborn and rebelious to listen. Reasoning didn't work with her so she went with them anyways. As they were set going, Donatella's pendant started glowing again faintly for a while. Probably sensing the weapon again. 

Once they were in the biggest and main island, their path seemed so scattered yet Donatella was able to lead them easily. Though, after some moments, some bushes started shaking violently and calming every moment as they walk. The creatures didn't wait the element of surprise and bashed at them, mainly at Dona. They were some ice bats with red eyes glowing as blood. 
 
They were easy to dispose off quickly, but that wasn't only it. As they kept walking, small amounts yet of many different creatures kept popping out of nowhere to attack them. All sorts of ice-regioned creatures kept coming. Goblins, ice beetles, tiny imps, even some little dragons breathing ice. They all were easy to kill but this was too much hastle and they kept overflowing in larger quantities. 

They had to ditch them out and look for the weapon for now. They were late from all the crazy creatures that kept popping. It's like as if they were being created at the same time one is defeated. The paths eventually lead into a big mountain covered completely with ice. The first steps of the mountain are drawn with some stairs branching into many different caves. Donatella's necklace lead the way as usual and they stumbled upon a wall which was covered with some magneficint paintings.

The wind carved icicle shapes and amazing bending of ice on this side of the mountain that it can be thought of more like a museum made entirely out of ice. The drawings show pictures of some weapons connected together in a podium and suddenly seperated around the world. The following pictures show the looks of each weapon seperately without any details or hints of their places, but the only weapon that is said where it is looks like a sword. Donatella argues it might be the Auguric Sword they're looking for, and the necklace all this time was leading them here.

She observes the drawings in the area of the sword on the wall and notices some weird patterns. There are some stars and wave drawings on top of each other. The sword is shown shining some sort of a light or a ray at the area and it shows the stars reflect it in the shape of a star in the sky. The drawing was simple yet the riddle wasn't understood. What could that mean?

The sword isn't here since the first place! Exclaimed one of her friends. It was Darlene. She says she had always read about a lot of history and geography of Vidalia and she knows enough to say that an island as much as the importance of the stars in the sky can only be found somewhere else. It's called the Birthstar Island. It's another massive island found far from south of Vidalia where legends say stars in the skies of Vidalia were created in that exact same island. And everyday, the island which is shaped as a star would glow in all area of it and shoot countless stars in the sky, forming amazing scenes of light playing between in the universe.

They can't waste anymore time. They immediately head to their kingdom and plan a ship prepared to to Birthstar island, the island where legends say stars are born. Donatella's neckalce glows even brighter than it was the more they go there. In their traveling path though, Donatella was wondering what would happen to her future. Would she be tied to all this forever? Will she ever find all the weapons before the insignia she herself holds destroy the world? She couldn't find answers. She needed to find them.

When Donatella was going to sleep, she noticed some noise from her bed blanket. Removing it quickly, she notices Cresselia, her faithful companion came with her. She couldn't possibly return her back can she now? She shakes her head as she heads to sleep with her tiny little baby swan next to her. Upon the morning, they almost reached their destination. So far they traveled a long distance. Several hours later, they have landed on Birthstar island. Dona's necklace didn't glow yet. The weapon must be hidden then somewhere. Walking a little more, Darlene suggests the weapon might be classically in the middle, so it's wise to walk straight.

Of course, nothing was easy. Birds of flame roamed on top and started throwing lava rocks of some sort at them, burning everything in their way to ashes instead of fire. Dona tries to run and protect her baby swan at the same time with her friends. More dangers appears in front of her. Slime monsters, and fast too emerge from the bottom of the land as they attack some of their friends. Everyone runs in several directions and splits up running or attacking unnoticing the others.

Donatella was alone chased by a slime monster and she couldn't attack the monster because she needed to protect her little friend between her hands. Eventually she loses the monster as she climbs a tree awaiting him to begone. After sometime, she dismounts of the tree ready with her friend trying to determine the path. The wind blows a little, eventually causing her necklace to glow. The glow wasn't as comfortable as it was before, it felt a little...scared or something.

As Donatella kept walking with her pet, she reached an end part of a waterfall. The necklace though, kept glowing. She theorized there might be some sort of an entrance behind the waterfall. She tried to enter from the side to prevent water on her from falling as much as possible on her. The cave seems to be connected with a panel of airways, she can see light from caves that seem to have openings on the top of this hill. The necklace leads her deeper and deeper until she reaches out a room in a small shrine that contains a glow; floating on it is the Auguric Sword.

She doesn't hesitate a moment and takes it. An overflow of positive energy flows through Dona, refreshing and soothing her out. That didn't last long though, the place started to tremble. She runs with her little baby swan from the other exit which leads them quickly out of the shrine that trembles and falls into pieces; collapsing and closing the entrance. She sighs a relief this was all over. But she has got to find her friends now.

The necklace, glows even harder, almost leaving Donatella's necklace. Dona is forced to run to be able to keep up with the necklace that decided to pull her. She ends up back to the ship. Is the necklace telling her to leave quickly and leave her friends? Donatella couldn't do it. She needed to find her friends and quickly! But it seems something else found her instead. A winged demon from coco appeared out of nowhere.

The creature welcomes itself as Ahriman. He is his "master's" right hand. Classically, he says he's afraid he might need the sword. Dona obviously refused to do it. Ahriman snaps out his fingers and sudden glowing auras in the sky appear. Her friends appear out of them stuck in magical chains that won't allow them to budge. Dona is choiced either her friends or the sword. She couldn't choose between the lives of her country or her friends.

Unexpectingly, her baby swan jumps at Ahriman and tries to knock him out. The attack didn't even tickle the monster. She was too young to fight. The demon threw a flaming ball at the swan, throwing her on the ground of the shore. Donatella got overflowing anger at her as she took the Auguric Sword and slashed the monster with it. Ahriman was angry and decided to unleash his full-mode at Dona from the very beginning. Donatella wasn't prepared to fight a legendary demon all by herself, even with a Life weapon.

Trying to block his attacks with her sword, (the sword is so strong it can do that) her pet suddenly opens its eyes to see Dona fighting for her, thinking Cresselia is dead. The baby swan wakes up, glowing brilliantley around her that Dona and Ahriman couldn't help but notice. Cresselia flew in the air a little and she illuminated her surroundings as she started glowing even brighter. In the end of the moment, she released a massive amount of energy in the form of light, to emerge as nothing but a colored phoenix dazzling the sky around her.

Donatella's mouth opened in surprise. She tried to close it but she couldn't. She was afraid her brain might just fall out! The phoenix's glory was enough to grow hate and fear in Ahriman's heart that he didn't have a thing to do but strike the bird with all its might. Cresselia was no match. With a delicate swing from her wings she created a magical thunderbolt that struck Ahriman with the rages of a thousand God. 

Of course, Ahriman was far stronger to die now. But he didn't give up. He pierced the wind to attack again, releasing enchanted flames and attacks never seen of before. Cresselia defended herself from the attacks, blocking his attacks with ease. Donatella didn't waste the chance. She took out the chance and climbed quickly a small hill as she jumped with all her might to strike Ahriman with her brand new fierce sword. Ahriman took a massive blow from the back and Cresselia took the chance and attacked from the front and threw a magical fireball at her opponent.

Defeated, yet not lost, Ahriman retreats the arena. Cresselia's power shrink quickly as she returns back to her little swan form. Donatella jumped back and caught her little tired swan. The mission was fulfilled to its zenith. They got the sword, they defeated Ahriman, and her swan unleashed its full hidden potential power. But something amazing occurs. Dona gains a new set of wings behind her back. She have gained a magical new look she can use to transform. She gains boosted powers and wings to help her fly.

Time skips back to the castle. They are all healed and full. The swan can now no longer get back to her phoenix form. It was a power never seen again.

The Auguric sword was now in the hands of a new master since endless centuries. Its full power is yet to be released. Donatella departs herself to the sage of the castle, Priest Dremstin. She asks him for the guiadance of who could be their danger known as Ahriman. He tells her the story of Cecil Pendragon and how he made everyone fear him (Scroll up to remember his story). His right hand was Ahriman, the master of darkness. 

Ahriman's powers were no match for Cecil so he had no choice but to be his minion. With privelages. Cecil has always been present in our future and checking every corner, even if he's trapped in another universe. He cannot escape, yet somehow, somewhere, he made his minion escape there to bring him the sword. The sage suspects Cecil's aim is to take the sword and get freed from his eternal prison. They must gather the Life weapon before Cecil escapes or chaos will be fallen.

Dona's friends, who have been overhearing all the time, suddenly enter and all draw they're ready for this. The question of how they knew is answered by the looks in their eyes. But that's not important. They all swear to fight for the sake of Vidalia and its people.

After 10 years, Dona's necklace finally shines. It has been forever since this happened. Dona's strength and abilities are far more able than before by now. They don't waste a moment. They all set to where she senses the next weapon is. The Sperion Defense shield. It's located somewhere in the seas of Western Vidalia. The deepest ocean is located there. They head out immediately.

Once they were in the right destination, the sea under them starts to tremble. The water flows up and down as a sea creature emerges its shadows from the depth. A mysterious kraken appears from below striking the ship straight. Dona strikes and jumps to attack the creature, injuring him a little. Her friends help and heal as they attack that monster. They set into a fight that is won easily. Maybe too easily for a kraken.

Once that is over, they're casted a spell to breath underwater by her friend Darlene. As they reach below, they encounter several sharks. Several magical attacks from Dona's sword defeat them easily. The shield is located in Dona's eyes. She swims thoroughly at it. As she places her hands on it, a tentacle wraps her arm as it scraps Dona out of her place. They have a small fight to break her hand but she successes in the end. Once she's there, the kraken, which is back again, releases a faint cry from a small blow Dona released. 

The kraken speaks. It's one of Cecil's minions. It wants to end Dona right here and there and take both weapons from her. Dona's friends arrive. They all team up to attack with her the Kraken as it releases swirls and attacks preventing them from approaching. But something else happens above the surface. Dona's swan, which now can easily transform into the phoenix anytime she wants, helps by attacking from above to strike the kraken with several bolts. The monster had enough from this small fight.

Its temper is too short. It opens a portal in the sea swirling everything in its path. Dona strifes to catch a rock to prevent falling as her friends do too. The vortex is too strong and Dona is sucked right through it. Dona's transformation fades. Her powers feel weak. Her sword is still with her though.

She falls in another universe. Present time, Earth. Townsville city is where she is now. She is lost. She don't know anyone. She doesn't know anything. The place seems less technologically developed than her world. The sword can be summoned anytime though still. But it lost a lot of its power. It seems Vidalia is what kept their powers strongers. The place where it was created is where its source power comes from. 

Her magic took a different form. She is doing some ice magic...but nothing enough. Most of her powers are coming from her sword now. She is yet to figure how to return to her world and find her friends. She has nothing to do now. She is lost and needs to find help.

The history is long, and some of it doesn't pertain to her herself. Condense the pre-Dona into a paragraph.

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Re: Donatella Pendragon

Post  Flame Melody on Fri Jan 17, 2014 11:05 pm

Fixed >Surprised. Except the part of shortening. Hope I convinced you enough before. Others yet to say no  Wink .
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Re: Donatella Pendragon

Post  techee on Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:15 am

For the history, just give us a neat summary of it all. Maybe a couple of paragraphs long or something. You don't have to give us details, and if you like, you can copy your history somewhere and have it linked on there in case you want people to read the full history.
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Sat Jan 18, 2014 10:46 pm

Better. I'll accept.

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Re: Donatella Pendragon

Post  Mr.Didathing on Sat Jan 18, 2014 11:19 pm

Approved.
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Post  Blueyedemoness on Sat Jan 18, 2014 11:37 pm

Looks good, Approved

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