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Post  Somefusionfallguy on Sat Mar 22, 2014 12:56 pm

Basic Information
Name: ''Snake'' Stein Metallusclaw. Age:  14. Species: Human. Ethnicity:Caucasian. Race:American. Gender: Male. Prefrence: Straight. Relation Status; Single.
Origin; Human. Allegiance; Neutral.  
Personality
Personality;
Snake is a one-minded individual, if he makes a decision he is usually prone to try and follow through it. though doing so leads to many accidents and problems to his misfortune. He tends to be friendly to others around him unless provoked into aggravation circumstances. He will try to persuade others to see the logic and reasoning of his point of view, when speaking his mind and persuading matters to others though only average in quality of doing so.

Strengths;
After training during various points in time during his early childhood, he is well coordinated with using one handed melee weapons [swords, etc] in combat against opponents, though on this in mind  he can be rendered vulnerable without any weapons in his possession during combat.
-Is well oriented managing money and trading goods
-is good his voice of opinions on matters that are important

Weaknesses;  
-Is young and still maturing, so can be easily manipulated into doing the bidding of others [for example mentioning the circumstance of his parent's untimely demise and further exploiting this weakness]
-sometimes he has too much pride and will not back away from a challenge
-is not good at using pistols or long ranged weopens
History
Pre-War arc.
''Snake'' was maternally born on January 22nd, 2033 in the Off World Plaza Hospital , with a 26 year old father and 27 year mother, his mother as an accountant and his father as a lawyer with a bachelor's degree in criminal justice.  Later moving to the suburban peach creek commons for a good paying job in defending clients in the court of law, and for better development for their newly born son.
Fusion War-Arc
At ten years of age, On March 31st, 2043 Fuse started his invasion on points of Earth, beginning the long campaign of invasion against human kind.  With various major points being invaded by fuses minions, the war in progress, inclining to the event of people being driven out of their home and the economy crashing, the Metallusclaw family immigrated from place to place, teaching their son the law and how to handle money in as a professional manor  as he further developed.

The family eventually made a permanent settlement in City point, the job of law having no money qualities during the frantic chase to repel fuses ongoing war against the human race, his mother handling the money distributed by bank complexes and traders among the masses of traders and families under similar conditions at that point in time

The boy grew in slow progression as the war against lord fuse continued. The family made a decent amount of money, [enough to pay for morgages , the transfer of goods supply's so they could proceed to sell them to the public market, and education for their only child] he was proceeded to be home schooled  by his father who at this point had to monozational job as his knowledge was expanded in the feild of educational proffeciency.


At the age of 12, the boys parents where caught in the midst of a swarm of fusion monsters. defenseless and unable to fight back they suffered very fatal injuries that led to their early untimely demise. Shocked by the news of his parent's death, the boy swore to help play a part in ending the war and removing the threat of the fusion menace.
Combat
Uses Nanos for combat; Yes.
Spoiler:
Snake uses Demongo [Dammage-Area], Courage [Health-Self], and Him. [Drain-Area]
Apearance
Snake is a average height ,lean Caucasian male with green eyes and spikey pink hair going down the length of his down his cheeks. Wearing a grey cloak folded over his spikey shirt, grey pants and green trimmed sneakers.


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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Mar 22, 2014 1:03 pm

You don't have to say what nanos he uses, just that he uses nanos. You also don't have to list his weapon. So far its a decent start.
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Thu Apr 17, 2014 4:51 pm

zerowing21 wrote:You don't have to say what nanos he uses, just that he uses nanos. You also don't have to list his weapon.

These two. At the moment there is not much for us to go off to give you help if you need it.

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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  zerowing21 on Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:59 pm

You need to fix the invasion date dude and most of the war history. You're short changing yourself on making a good character history.
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Jun 25, 2014 2:13 pm

Somefusionfallguy wrote:
Personality

Needs info.

Strengths;
After training during various points in time during his early childhood, he is well coordinated with using one handed melee weapons [swords, etc] in combat against opponents, though on this in mind  he can be rendered vulnerable without any weapons in his possession during combat.

Weaknesses;  
-Is young and still maturing, so can be easily manipulated into doing the bidding of others [for example mentioning the circumstance of his parent's untimely demise and further exploiting this weakness]

Both of these are one each. He needs at least three each.

''Snake'' was maternally born on January 22nd, 2043 in the Off World Plaza Hospital ,

If he were to start in the RP, he'd be 4. Fuse invaded in 2043. We began the RP in the year 2045, which is two years after the Invasion of Fuse. It's been two years, maybe three since then. That would make the year somewhere around 2047-48. So he'd be 4-5.

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Post  zerowing21 on Wed Jun 25, 2014 10:39 pm

I would like a bit more added to the personality for one. Just feels like it needs a tad more positives and a few more negatives. I would also like to see a bit more added to early life in the history
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Jun 25, 2014 11:48 pm

Somefusionfallguy wrote:Personality;
Snake is a one-minded individual, if he makes a decision he is usually prone to try and follow through it. though doing so leads to many accidents and problems to his misfortune. he tends to be freindly to others around him unless proveked into aggravation.

Add just a little more to his personality. In his strengths you mentioned he voices his opinions. When he speaks his mind, does he simply do so to do so, or does he tried to persuade people to see his point of view? And if it is the latter, is he good at it? Bad at it?

Is well educated in law

This is my only issue out of the strengths because I don't think education in law is resourceful for the war. You could add it to his personality, that he knows the law and will spout out information like it, but I just can't see it as a strength.

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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  Somefusionfallguy on Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:57 pm

Ok, Thank you guys. The bio has been updated but is most likely going to be subject further subject to edits as more suggestions are posted.
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Jun 28, 2014 12:10 am

He looks better, what say you kyra?
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Sat Jun 28, 2014 12:10 am

I'll accept.

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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Jun 28, 2014 12:17 am

*gives stamp of approval.
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  Mr.Didathing on Sat Jun 28, 2014 12:36 am

I accept.
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Re: Marcus Lynn

Post  techee on Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:24 am

Looks good. I like. I accept.
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