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Alex Torres

Post  BusterKnight on Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:05 pm

Name: Alex Torres
Age: 21
Ethnicity: European
Allegiance: Good
Origins: Human
Appearance:

Strengths: He is very strong and well built. Very good in a fist fight,

namely street fights. He also is very good with shotguns.

Weaknesses: His anger gets the better of him. He has the bad

habit of spacing out at random times, even during fights. Strong fear

of loss and has martyr tendencies. Fear of Elephants.

Personality: Alex is the overprotective big brother sort despite being

adopted and a middle child. He will protect Cody, Catherine, and

whoever he chooses at the expense of himself. He always makes sure

to strike fear into his enemies and any threats. He shows no fear in

a better, even enjoying fights that are bigger than a street fight. He

fears and hates elephants.

Vices: Aggression - threatening behavior or actions

Chauvinism - unreasoning, overenthusiastic, or aggressive loyalty to a particular gender, group, or cause

Haughtiness - behaving in a superior, condescending, or arrogant way

History: Alex was born at a circus. With no special talents, he was forced

to clean up and do whatever tasks he was told. His Mother died

when he was age 7 in a Elephant addcident, giving him a strong

fear and hate of elephants. He was dropped off at a orphanage at

age 9 when the circus closed down and was adopted in the Torres

at age 10. He protects his new family and does not accept people

disrespecting them, beating up other kids and attacking other adults

who would be disrespectful to Cody and Catherine. He was

devastated at the death of the Torres Mother and went into a deep

depression until he decided to join in the war effort.

Do you use nanos: Yes


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Re: Alex Torres

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:21 pm

1) You forgot the nanos part, not a big deal. 2) His personality needs more vices (now I sound like kyra) 3) You could mention the fear as one of his weakness, also I could tell if the first weakness is one or two combined.
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Re: Alex Torres

Post  techee on Sat Jun 07, 2014 4:46 pm

You have to have more in the strengths and the weaknesses. You also need to add a little bit more in the personality. As for nanos, you got to put if he uses them or not, although I think he'll probably use them.
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Re: Alex Torres

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Sat Jun 07, 2014 9:47 pm

BusterKnight wrote:Personality: Alex is the overprotective big brother sort despite being

adopted and a middle child. He will protect Cody, Catherine, and

whoever he chooses at the expense of himself. He always makes sure

to strike fear into his enemies and any threats. He shows no fear in

a better, even enjoying fights that are bigger than a street fight. He

fears and hates elephants.

How does he strike fear at his enemies if said enemies are Fusions or beings with powers? Does he do it through physical display? Emotional attacks?

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Re: Alex Torres

Post  Blueyedemoness on Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:45 pm

This profile needs a bit of work. The most I see a bit of construction needed is the weakness bit. How is being fearful of loss being a weakness? I think you should probably put something else instead that doesn't necessarily have to do with fear, but something that can, maybe, physically harm him or have a fear of a particular thing like closed spaces or arachnids.

The only other thing is that you need to mention if he uses Nanos or not

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Re: Alex Torres

Post  zerowing21 on Mon Jun 09, 2014 2:44 pm

You added in what kyra wanted, but I don't see more vices or the nano thing.
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Re: Alex Torres

Post  zerowing21 on Mon Jun 09, 2014 3:26 pm

I'll accept him thought the vices didn't need to be listed like that.
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Re: Alex Torres

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Mon Jun 09, 2014 4:34 pm

I'll accept

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Re: Alex Torres

Post  Mr.Didathing on Mon Jun 09, 2014 4:38 pm

Accepted.  ACCEPT ALL THE THINGS.
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Re: Alex Torres

Post  techee on Mon Jun 16, 2014 4:15 pm

I accept.
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