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Haylee Ashby

Post  RP_AliceS on Sat Aug 30, 2014 10:46 am

Name:
Haylee Ashby

Age:
Sixteen

Ethnicity:
American

Race:
Human

Allegiance:
Neutral

Origins:
Magic User

Powers:
Dirt Shield - She moves dirt into the form of a shield. It only nullifies attacks. (Weak)

Crash - When she hits the ground hard it will create a crater that lasts for a three foot radius. (Medium)

Armor - An armor of stone and dirt forms around her. Depending on the materials in that area it might be bad. (Weak-Medium)

Spikes - A circle of spikes erupt around the enemy and a large spike comes straight up the middle. (Medium)

Appearance:
She is five-foot six and has pure brown eyes. Her hair is dirty-blonde and reaches a few inches below her shoulders. She normally wears a plain colored t-shirt with her light green jacket over it. She also wears blue jeans that are rolled up on the bottom. She has a gun holster that always contains her Tuned Null Void Pistol. Her shoes are green with a black lining.

Strengths:
- She is really good at math and is a swift reader.
- She is great at handling her gun and is very accurate.
- She has learned to control her short temper almost completely.

Weaknesses:
- She can't bring herself to kill.
- She sinks like a rock when she tries to swim.
- She absolutely hates being alone, except for at her house.

Personality:
She is a really kind person, but can lose her temper easily. She hates being alone with all her heart because of her parents' death. She has a tendency to act like a little kid. She is easy to upset. She loves walking around the park when she is bored. She jokes around a lot and pulls small pranks every now and then. She is honest all the time and very rarely hurts people on purpose. She dislikes it when people point out the obvious or say something stupid.

History:
When she was born her parents sent her to an adoption center. She had been there for four years before she was ever adopted. When she was she was really happy and she liked her step-mom. Her mom always took her out for ice cream and brought her to the park often. About ten years later she died in a car accident. Haylee couldn't afford to keep the house, so she moved away to a less expensive house. She had brought a picture of her mom with her and sometimes talks to it. She constantly trains with her weapons because of the war with fuse, even though she knows she probably cannot bring herself to kill.

Do you use nanos?:
No


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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  techee on Sat Aug 30, 2014 11:03 am

For starters, the idea is good. But let me start with the things I think requires work. You need at least one direct attack; you got two defensive spells and one spell that's attack, but not necessarily that great of a spell. As for strength: controlling anger might not be as strong of a strength and could be changed a little. The rest is done very well. Just change those things, and you'll be good.
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Aug 30, 2014 11:04 am

The personality needs more vices and more positives. How does she get involved with the war against fuse?
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  RP_AliceS on Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:16 pm

Fixed. I think
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  Mr.Didathing on Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:34 pm

I'll be Paula Abdul.

By which I mean first approve.
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:58 pm

*stamps approved on the OC's forehead*
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  RP_AliceS on Sat Aug 30, 2014 1:12 pm

Yay that's two... I forget is it three or four approves that I need?
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  Mr.Didathing on Sat Aug 30, 2014 1:16 pm

Four, at the moment.
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Aug 30, 2014 1:17 pm

Since Kyra is going to be busy for awhile with work and school, For now the needed approves are going to be 3.
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  RP_AliceS on Sat Aug 30, 2014 2:57 pm

Yay, only one more to go!
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  zerowing21 on Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:41 pm

Please don't post in the rp section to get attention of someone who can accept a character.
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  techee on Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:54 pm

Good to go, I approve.
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Re: Haylee Ashby

Post  RP_AliceS on Sun Aug 31, 2014 3:27 pm

zerowing21 wrote:Please don't post in the rp section to get attention of someone who can accept a character.

I was reading that and thinking about my OC. That's a bad mix. I'm so sorry
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