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(First OC) Kyle Para

Post  AustinTylerTaylor on Mon Feb 16, 2015 11:12 pm



Name:
Kyle Para

Age:
12

Ethnicity:
American

Race:
Human

Allegiance:
Neutral

Origins:
Human

Weapons:
Kyle's wooden katana, given to him by his grandfather, it is surprisingly sharp for a wooden katana, but is really useful when time comes.

Appearance:
Kyle has black hair and hazel eyes. He wears a black shirt with his black jacket over it and blue jeans. He sometimes has a sheath on his side for his katana and always wears sneakers. He is average height for his age.

Strengths:
- He is really experienced in sword fighting.
- He is abnormally fast for his age.
- His paranoia, like a double edged blade, can keep him extremely alert.

Weaknesses:
- Paranoia to the max! He is so jittery that sometimes even wind blowing on his neck freaks him out.
- Defenseless against long ranged attacks.
- He cannot climb trees or anything at that.

Personality:
As mentioned in his strengths and weaknesses he does have quite a bit of paranoia which can result in not making friends. He is a nice enough fellow though and always tries to be nice. He is pretty hyper as well making him fun to be around. He cannot take jokes whatsoever. He doesn't handle change so well and he prefers being outside of buildings instead of inside. He absolutely loves hanging around people he can "trust."

History:
He was raised by his father for about one year before he died of cancer and was taken in by is grandfather, who happened to run a kendo studio in a somewhat remote place. He became pretty skilled over the years and school bullying boosted his paranoia making him react to small things (good or bad.) He eventually moved with his grandpa to The Cul-De-Sac because his grandfather, unlike him, was interested in helping out during the war. He still had somewhat a hard life here and escapes it by visiting the park often and tried blocking out what his grandpa was doing. He has met fusions a few times before and didn't know how to react, so got beat up quite a bit. Since then instead of keeping his katana at home, it now never leaves his side. Now that he lives here and sees more Fusions, he has continuously told himself that he wants no part of the war, though he did want to be in the KND before he decided not to go for it. He even one time pushed someone in front of him and ran from those green demons, of course he did pay them a visit to apologize, only to get kicked.

Do you use nanos:
No


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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  Nano_Zac on Tue Feb 17, 2015 12:47 am

Wow, this is good. did you have it made from a past creation/rp?
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  zerowing21 on Tue Feb 17, 2015 7:37 am

Paranoia is not a power. Expand on personality. We need more positive and Negative traits and history needs more to it.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  AustinTylerTaylor on Tue Feb 17, 2015 8:12 am

Nano_Zeus wrote:Wow, this is good. did you have it made from a past creation/rp?

zeus ive had Kyle since we started rping with psy...

zerowing21 wrote:Paranoia is not a power. Expand on personality. We need more positive and Negative traits and history needs more to it.

The power was a joke and as for the personality and history i will do right now
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  techee on Tue Feb 17, 2015 2:15 pm

Looks good. A real solid character. I will accept him.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  zerowing21 on Tue Feb 17, 2015 8:03 pm

....You don't place it in as a joke. You either have powers or you don't. Also I want more on the history. Its barely enough meat on the bone. Give a bigger explanation of his past.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  AustinTylerTaylor on Tue Feb 17, 2015 8:05 pm

Fixed, and removed.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  zerowing21 on Tue Feb 17, 2015 8:23 pm

One line or so does not add to the history. Tell us more of his early life, how he gets involved with the war against fuse.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  AustinTylerTaylor on Tue Feb 17, 2015 9:19 pm

There I think. War influence added
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  zerowing21 on Tue Feb 17, 2015 9:23 pm

Ethnicity is not white. It would English or French or something else like that.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  AustinTylerTaylor on Tue Feb 17, 2015 9:24 pm

Done
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  Mr.Didathing on Thu Feb 19, 2015 10:43 am

I like it well enough.  Approved by me.  Might wanna get rid of that "always has a smile on his face" part though.  Not sure if it gels with all the paranoia.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  AustinTylerTaylor on Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:18 pm

Fixed.
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Re: (First OC) Kyle Para

Post  Kaiser on Thu Oct 15, 2015 7:33 pm

Is the camera suppose to be a pic of the character or not? It's broke if it is.

He doesn't handle change so well and he prefers being outside of buildings instead of inside.
If he is incredibly paranoid, shouldn't that be the opposite? Wouldn't his paranoia make him think the known inside is better than the unknown possibilities that could occur outside?

He has met fusions a few times before and didn't know how to react, so got beat up quite a bit.
The fusions would have done a lot more than just beat him up. They would have tried to kill him without any kind of mercy. How did he survive if he didn't know how to fight back during those encounters?

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