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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Fri Apr 24, 2015 2:01 am

Ok, thanks!


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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Sun Apr 26, 2015 2:11 am

I was reading the "required readings" again, and I saw the timeline. So, I edited my character's history to fit the timeline, along with some tweaks to grammar and readability and structure. Should be better than it was before now Very Happy
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Sun Apr 26, 2015 4:08 am

Alright, made some more changes, I added "inventory" (to help myself remember what I have) and a spoiler containing the secrets to some of his history.


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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Sun Apr 26, 2015 8:07 pm

I feel weird, documenting my changes like this...

A question-are we allowed to have relative OC's?
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Ryuga on Sun Apr 26, 2015 8:16 pm

Related OCs? Yeas
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Sun Apr 26, 2015 9:18 pm

Ok.
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  zerowing21 on Mon Apr 27, 2015 10:04 pm

Alligence can't really be undecided.
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Mon Apr 27, 2015 10:49 pm

zerowing21 wrote:Alligence can't really be undecided.

Just put neutral.

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After reviewing the posts, your OC was accepted after Techee since you had: Amp's, mine, and techee's approvals.

So he's good to go. Just fix allegiance and begin in the rp.

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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:02 am

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:
zerowing21 wrote:Alligence can't really be undecided.

Just put neutral.

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After reviewing the posts, your OC was accepted after Techee since you had: Amp's, mine, and techee's approvals.

So he's good to go. Just fix allegiance and begin in the rp.

Sorry, your earlier post was a little hard to...understand...I didn't realize "fix that up and I'll accept it" meant what it...meant. Anyway YAY I HAVE 3 APPROVALS! Very Happy
Time to begin...

EDIT: Urm...I can't post stuff...you forgot to give me access to post in the Open World?
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Tue Apr 28, 2015 1:30 pm

Sorry about that. You'll be able to post now.

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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Tue Apr 28, 2015 6:25 pm

Kyra_Xyrespace wrote:Sorry about that. You'll be able to post now.
Well, that WAS why I thought I wasn't accepted yet.
Thanks though.
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Thu Dec 24, 2015 6:52 pm

Alright, he has been updated to reveal some more shiz about him.....(He has a double personality?! and also why he has amnesia)

Zero says I need a re-approval, so here it is.
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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Mon Dec 28, 2015 6:16 pm

Where did this dissociative identity disorder come from? This is a big stretch to have, especially so late in the game when he never had a reason for it in the first place. On top of that, you can't gain DID just by messing around in the brain; if you could, neuropsychologists would have already learned how to "fix" DID. DID is a psychological disorder; he has to experience a trauma.

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Re: Samuel Serafino

Post  Gamefactory123 on Tue Dec 29, 2015 5:30 pm

BUT THAT WAS THE FIRST DRAFT!

AND THE SECOND DRAFT...will never happen.

*Walks away in shame*
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