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2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Greedy baron on Thu Sep 03, 2015 12:02 am

Name: Hitomi Iolanthe
Age: 12 Years Old
Ethnicity: White
Allegiance: Neutral
Origins: Human
Powers: N/A
Appearance: 4ft Tall, Pale White Skin, Snow White Hair, Purple Eyes, and a neutral expression usually on her face. Usually likes to wear plain colored shirts, black and grey military pants, a white hoodie sometimes, and fingerless gloves.

Strengths:
- Hitomi's eye sight is especially refined, enabling her to exploit varying factors of sight including distance, measurements, and details such as robotics and engineering.
- Hitomi has an observant personality, and is able to pick up on peoples' emotions and feelings extremely well.
- After being found by Domino, he instructed Hitomi in various combat styles. CQC became her forte, to the point where she could almost restrain Domino. She excels in both hand-to-hand and blades.
- Domino's lessons in rifling allow for Hitomi to manage most low caliber rifles easily.

Weaknesses:
-Hitomi is quiet and doesn't like to talk or socialize, thus establishing an introvert personality and avoidance of (human) people.
-Hitomi has a SEVERE paranoia of small, cramped spaces and dislikes being put into a scenario where escape is not a possibly. If put into a small space, Hitomi falls into a shock-like state.
-Hitomi has a natural distrust of establishment and questions everything; from motives to the natural order of things.
-Hitomi has a brutal and forthright way of talking, never beating around the bush whenever she actually communicates with another being, but most of the time never does it maliciously.

Personality: Hitomi is a strong spirited, yet soft spoken girl. She trusts and is comfortable around Domino, but avoids talking in general, though she does observe people's personality in a distant manner. She has a big heart, but hides it behind a cold front, cautious of letting it be used against her. She shares Domino's belief of helping people in need, and assists those who need it, yet refuses to admit it straight out. She was a soft spot for snakes and spiders.

History: Born to a slightly abnormal family, Hitomi was the youngest of 12 children, and was quietest among them. Growing up, her parents constantly bestowed extra attention to her in attempt to have her open up (including giving her piano lessons because she seemed to enjoy them), but to no avail. When Fuse and his forces assaulted Earth, Hitomi's house was destroyed shortly thereafter, and her family relocated to a secluded area and dwelled in a series of small caves to ensure their safety. One night, after they had been there for about two years, they were raided by a group of ragtag bandits during the night, who were looking for teouble, and killed most of Hitomi's family. Hitomi slept in a further area than the rest of her family, and didn't see exactly what happened, but her oldest brother, Gabriel took Hitomi and fled into the heart of the caves, hiding in a crevice until the raiders had left. Her brother then took her to the city where he managed to scrape out just enough to allow them both to survive. After watching his family being murdered Gabriel slowly became paranoid, suspecting everyone of ulterior motives, even refusing help from good-nature people.  It became so bad that he began to fear the for the life of his sister. Instead of taking her with him, as he was prone to doing, he kept her in a closet of a locked house during the day until he got back that evening. It was one day after he had left her in there that he had a mental breakdown in the park, and was sent to the hospital, and declared mentally insane. Hitomi spent four days in the closet before managing to breakout (her brother usually left her a lunch and some water). She came out of the closet completely starved and scared out of her mind. Hitomi then struggled for a bit, looking for food and shelter, until she came across one of the bandits who had killed her family. Recognizing the insignia that her Gabriel had described, she flew into a rage and tried to attack him, but ended up being beaten by the bruiser. Hurt, Homeless, and despising humanity, she fled to Peach Creek Estates, where she lived amongst the empty houses and stayed by herself for 5 years before being found by Domino. After being cornered, caught, and cared for by him (who pitied her) she became close friends with Domino, who pretty much became her 7ft tall guardian angel.
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Kaiser on Thu Sep 03, 2015 5:10 pm

Perception: Hitomi is able to exploit varying factors of sight including distance, measurements, and details such as robotics and engineering.

Can you explain that more? I'm not sure what you mean there.

Perception (Extended): Due to her shyness and quite-like nature, Hitomi is able to pick up on peoples' emotions and feelings extremely well.
If she's shy, shouldn't that be the other way around? If she's shy, that means she's nervous around other people. Wouldn't her own nervousness make it extremely hard to notice that stuff? Especially since she avoids people as stated here:
-Hitomi is quiet and doesn't like to talk or socialize, thus establishing an introvert personality and avoidance of (human) people.

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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Greedy baron on Fri Sep 04, 2015 8:33 am

Alright, so fixed the part about her perception. What I meant was that she simply has really good eye sight and an ability to pick things out in the smalest detail.
Also corrected her second perception: In being reserved and quiet, yes she avoids talking and direct interaction as much as possible. But this allows for her to observe people, almost in a studying fashion, and because of that she can pick up emotions and what people mgiht be thinking.
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Kaiser on Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:18 pm

Alright thanks for explanation. The only thing I still have a problem with is:
Hitomi spent two days in the closet before managing to breakout. She came out of the closet half starved and scared out of her mind.
That's the thing that broke her? Not the fact that almost her entire family was slaughtered at a really young age (I assume anyway)? Also, how did these raiders find her family if they were in hiding and for what purpose would they attack her family? Money? Food? Just to be jerks? There's also the fact that both of these events happen before she turns ten. How is her brother mentally insane but she isn't?

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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Greedy baron on Fri Sep 04, 2015 9:47 pm

Detailed the history to make it a little clearer. Hitomi didn't actually see her family murdered but she knows that they are dead. Her brother, however, was there with the rest of the family and watched them all die before saving his sister. While Hitomi was distraught over her family, the toll was greater on her brother. Updated the length of time in the closet so as to to make it a little more believable. Her 'breaking point' is not as simple as her brothers (who had a little more reason for a more extravagant breakdown), as she was born rather quiet and reserved already. So she basically became more introverted as a result. Being locked in a closet simply generated her phobia and a stronger sense of loneliness and self-dependence.
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Kaiser on Fri Sep 04, 2015 9:57 pm

I'll give it an approval for now.

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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Greedy baron on Fri Sep 04, 2015 9:58 pm

Alright, and I'll also try to improve on it a little more. Thanx
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Greedy baron on Sun Sep 06, 2015 9:24 am

Made the phobia aspect more crippling
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:13 am

I would like another negative trait in personalty and please do not compare her to Domino in her weaknesses.
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Greedy baron on Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:18 pm

Alright did both, what do you think?
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Sep 09, 2015 3:00 pm

Greedy baron wrote:Appearance: 4ft Tall, Pale White Skin, Snow White Hair, Purple Eyes, and a neutral expression usually on her face.

What is her normal attire?

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Post  Greedy baron on Wed Sep 09, 2015 9:02 pm

Shirt with with black and grey military pants.
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Re: 2nd OC: Hitomi

Post  Professor Utonium on Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:22 pm

I'll give an approval for this character. You need one more.

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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Wed Sep 09, 2015 11:32 pm

I'll give an approval.

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