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Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 1:43 am

Name: Jon, he forgot his last name (Jon the Kid)

Age: 13 years

Ethnicity: Human

Allegiance: Good fight

Origins: Human

Powers: None

Appearance: A small, yet skinny kid with dirty blonde hair (natural) that could be described as honey colored, and he has small arms for some reason. He does not understand why (not ridiculously small, just a bit shorter than normal) He also has the very rare genome to have green eyes.

Strengths: 1. He is quite fast to escape slippery situations, mostly of the fusion kind.
2. For a kid who was raised during the invasion, he is quite intelligent and an excellent strategist, despite being an early teen.
3. He is quick to make decisions that usually turn out right. Basically he has some luck on his side, but not all of it.

Weaknesses:  1. Well, being skinny also means he has a ravenous appetite that can easily sway and persuade him, even to doing something bad or to trick him.
2. Remember, he is just an early teen. He cracks under pressure and gets anxious easily.  He can also be a bit to cocky with a simple foe, that might just turn out to be harder than expected.
3. You know how I said he was quick to decide? That is his major downfall. Not planning a secure plot for his idea and just winging it. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't.

Personality: He is a bit of an introvert and doesn't trust many. But once he does trust someone, he opens up and kind of talks a lot. This doesn't stop his love for Adventure Time, as he constantly fantasized about meeting with Finn and Jake in person. He is quick on his feet and with his decisions. He can be cocky if the chances are on his side, too. He is still just a kid to others though, and if things get too rough he tries to escape. He isn't the best of the best, he's just another survivor. Growing up in the apocalypse is to thank for his introvert personality. He likes others that nerd out about his role model, Jake. He also is an aspiring scientist, and made his own hoverboard out of scavenged materials. It runs quite well, surprisingly. One of his pet peeves is when people say things more than once. It just grinds his gears.

History: No, I'm not going to say both of his parents died. He actually was meant to be aborted, but one of the doctors offered an adoption. As he grew, he learned to ignore his past and he learned much about science and he aspired to be a scientist like Dexter, another role model of his. Unfortunately his plans were all cut off when Planet Fuse arrived at the age of 8. He was forced to watch his adopted mother get brutally torn apart by a horde of spawns. At the sight of this, something changed inside him. He became so infuriated with Planet Fuse, he swore his life to its downfall. Seeing the corpse of his mother lit the spark in him that he wanted to be a soldier with real training. He couldn't bear to see any fusion again afterwards. Now he is a street boy, just hanging around to try and kill time until he's 14, which he will try to join the army against Fuse. He makes pay to live by being a contamination clearer, of course not without proper gear. He goes into infected zones and clears paths for Heroes to tread with a very special hazmat suit. It makes fairly good pay, for a dangerous job, and he has a large sum in a bank that he is saving for a house when he gets older. With his (mild) experience with fusion monsters, he knows how to fend for himself. Growing up in the apocalypse really helps. He is also currently looking for that apartment he wants in Pokey Oakes, it is small but fits his needs.

Nanos: He can use nanos, but he doesn't have any yet.


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Re: Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:19 am

Please delete the blank form above your stuff.

Just say neutral for his alignment

You don't need race if the character is human

Origins would just be human.

If he's human, he's not going to have powers.

You need to expand on his personality, adding in more positive and negative traits.

History issue, if fuse arrived when he was he'd be at least 13 now, not 9. Please read the timeline in the required reading section.
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Re: Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:20 am

Alright, thanks man. This is the first OC I've made anyway...
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:37 am

no problem. Sorry if I seemed harsh, just keep going with the corrections.
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Re: Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:12 pm

Is it at least "up to code" now? Don't want to be pushy, just remember that. Yep, just a question.
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:21 pm

I would not count weapons as powers. As a human he wouldn't have powers.
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Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:36 pm

Right, so should there be a weapons section? I'm a bit confuzzeld.
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:57 pm

There's no need for a weapon section. If you want him to have a that gun, he can.
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Re: Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 12:58 pm

Alright I'll do some more editing.
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Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 2:04 pm

How is it now guys? pls pls pls get approves Hmm what I didn't say anything Wink
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 3:27 pm

You have to change bits now to match the age of being 13. Or if you wish to keep him 9, he'd have to be 4 when the invasion starts, your call.
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Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 3:32 pm

got it, he is 8 when the invasion starts, 5 year difference.
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 3:34 pm

Now to see what the others think.
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Re: Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 4:30 pm

What about you, zero wing? Smile
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 4:38 pm

Your second weakness, the second half verges on it being a personality trait. Reword it.
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Post  SirGamer101 on Mon Sep 07, 2015 5:08 pm

Kind of just changed it, but it's good now right?
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Post  Kaiser on Mon Sep 07, 2015 11:12 pm

You forgot to change one instance of him being 9 to 13.

Other than that, approved.

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Re: Jon, just Jon the kid

Post  SirGamer101 on Tue Sep 08, 2015 12:14 am

Alright I finished it. Thank you, Kaiser for approval.
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Post  SirGamer101 on Wed Sep 09, 2015 6:18 pm

Anyone? H-hello?
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Post  zerowing21 on Wed Sep 09, 2015 6:53 pm

I'll give a tentative approval.
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Post  Mr.Didathing on Wed Sep 09, 2015 7:22 pm

Same from moi.
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Post  SirGamer101 on Wed Sep 09, 2015 9:59 pm

Thanks, guys! Ill be waiting for that boot camp tomorrow hopefully!
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