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Post  youngjusticeforever on Sun Jan 24, 2016 12:56 am

History: Kairi Asikama was born in Pokey Oaks North, and had a fairly normal childhood. She played, she ate, she slept. One day however, she noticed a home-less man on her way to kindergarten(she was 5), she had five Taros from her allowance. The man asked if she could spare some and she said no, as she needed it for lunch. Her mother just encouraged her to walk on, to which she complied. She didn't notice that he was, quite literally, starving. She walked away, to school, feeling somewhat proud that she managed to keep her Taros.

The next day, when she walked past that man, he was dead(from starvation), and she felt extremely guilty, and when she got to school she ended up bursting into tears, to which Bubbles offered to play with her, and she sadly accepted.

During the next few years, she played with Bubbles more, giving her a large box of Crayons. Bubbles in response gave her a chocolate chip cookie, which was her favorite. Kairi slowly opened up and attempted to befriend the other Power Puff Girl's, being somewhat scared by Buttercup and alright with Blossom. During a sleep-over at their place she was not as scared of Buttercup and saw that Buttercup wasn't just mean.

When she was 10, she at Bubble's birthday party(and Blossom and Buttercup's), decided she was going to make some of the food, wanting to do it herself and not trouble anyone. She discovered she had an ability to cook well, and promptly made food as much as she could for people. She especially went out on Mother's Day where she would give her mom breakfest-lunch and dinner in bed, with dessert. She was placed into advanced classes due to her intellect, working at a high school level, which her mother seemed to be concerned about it being unhealthy for a child her age to be working with such older children.

When she turned 11, her mother died in a car crash due to Kairi distracting her by kicking her mom's seat and shouting about wanting Ice Cream. She spent two months in the hospital, rarely eating or talking to anyone. She eventually got better, for a short time and was permitted to go home, but she has always felt guilty. Her father started calling her worthless, and verbally abusing her. He often compared her to her mother, saying how she was better. He eventually stopped in favor of neglecting Kairi.

One comment from her dad sent Kairi over the edge. That the PPG's were far more better than her. Kairi was twelve. Kairi trained brutally, exhausting herself to reach new heights, just to prove her dad wrong. This continued to her adulthood. When she was 18 she moved out, and moved to Bellwood, hoping to start fresh. She took up Archery to help keep her more distracted, she quit the class because it was too easy, when she was 20, a year later, and she used her skils, her intellect and her archery abilities to survive, by hunting. She bought her own Bow and Quiver, no arrows. She decided to craft her own arrows herself, which thanks to her intellect, was simple.

Hunting was an art that required stealth, and quiet. So she decided to buy a Leotard for hunting purposes, eventually that was her main outfit. She hated live in Bellwood though, and decided to move back to Pokey Oaks, deciding to just not interact with her spiteful father.

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Oh and some answers. Bellwood seems a social like area, she would not do well in a job and I don't think someone would hire her. And she wouldn't steal things except mayybe from the rich, and I thought there was a forest near Bellwood. And Bellwood is suburban.

She isn't moving back to her father, she's just moving back to Pokey Oaks.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Sun Jan 31, 2016 10:55 am

Uh, does this mean that I am good to go?
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Post  zerowing21 on Thu Feb 18, 2016 4:34 pm

Since show is now on a perma hiatus, I'll have to take over for him. You did seem to address several things Shadow wanted. Maybe she moved back to the pokeyoaks area, but maybe into like the genius grove area or something.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Thu Feb 18, 2016 9:09 pm

zerowing21 wrote:Since show is now on a perma hiatus, I'll have to take over for him. You did seem to address several things Shadow wanted. Maybe she moved back to the pokeyoaks area, but maybe into like the genius grove area or something.

Perhaps. I'd imagine she wouldn't want to be too close to where she grew up, but not too far away. So, Genius Grove would work.
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:00 pm

Please repost up the character with the changes, so I can see everything that youve done.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Fri Mar 04, 2016 7:05 pm

Name: Kairi Asaikima

Age: 22

Ethnicity: Caucasian

Race: Human

Allegiance: Heroes

Origins: Human

Powers: None

Appearance: Kairi typically either has her hair in a Pony-tail or in a braid. She's thin, but she has considerable muscle as well. She typically wears a black and silver leotard with a night sky scheme. It runs from her hips to her shoulders, although exposing some of her stomach and parts of her back. For shoes she wears simple slippers. She also has finger-less gloves with sticky things on the palms for better grip.
APPEARANCE:
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Strengths: Above average intellect(from both natural talent and studying), Kairi is capable of understanding complex scientific terms and math problems, to the extent where she could be considered a genius. This helps her with her arrows as she can utilize this to her advantage(such as creating special trick arrows or with firing the arrows at pin-point locations).

Kairi also has enhanced agility, speed and slightly above average strength, due to intense training. She also has high stamina.

She also is extremely adept with a Bow and Arrow, able to fire round after round with great accuracy.

Weaknesses: Kairi is socially awkward making it difficult for her in basic social events

Kairi is also horrible with hand-to-hand or close quarters combat, as such she relies primarily upon her Bow and Arrows.

Kairi's leotard tends to be uncomfortable, and can be seen as unfit for combat situations(although given her Arrow style, it can help due to being less clunky and heavy)

Personality: Kairi loves to help other people, and is very selfless. Kairi is also impulsive and impatient however, not liking to wait for too long. She is very emotional and easily offended, but she is also quick to forgive. She is very sympathetic to others

Kairi is very creative and energetic, full of life. She loves painting and shopping. Despite this, she also has an Inferiority Complex and feels inadequate, constantly comparing herself to others. Kairi also likes to cook, feeling it's the one thing she's good at. Kairi has a fear of fusions as well. She's very intelligent as well. Kairi is also forgetful at times, forgetting what she's hunting for or what she was doing.

History: Kairi Asikama was born in Pokey Oaks North, and had a fairly normal childhood. She played, she ate, she slept. One day however, she noticed a home-less man on her way to kindergarten(she was 5), she had five Taros from her allowance. The man asked if she could spare some and she said no, as she needed it for lunch. Her mother just encouraged her to walk on, to which she complied. She didn't notice that he was, quite literally, starving. She walked away, to school, feeling somewhat proud that she managed to keep her Taros.

The next day, when she walked past that man, he was dead(from starvation), and she felt extremely guilty, and when she got to school she ended up bursting into tears, to which Bubbles offered to play with her, and she sadly accepted.

During the next few years, she played with Bubbles more, giving her a large box of Crayons. Bubbles in response gave her a chocolate chip cookie, which was her favorite. Kairi slowly opened up and attempted to befriend the other Power Puff Girl's, being somewhat scared by Buttercup and alright with Blossom. During a sleep-over at their place she was not as scared of Buttercup and saw that Buttercup wasn't just mean.

When she was 10, she at Bubble's birthday party(and Blossom and Buttercup's), decided she was going to make some of the food, wanting to do it herself and not trouble anyone. She discovered she had an ability to cook well, and promptly made food as much as she could for people. She especially went out on Mother's Day where she would give her mom breakfest-lunch and dinner in bed, with dessert. She was placed into advanced classes due to her intellect, working at a high school level, which her mother seemed to be concerned about it being unhealthy for a child her age to be working with such older children.

When she turned 11, her mother died in a car crash due to Kairi distracting her by kicking her mom's seat and shouting about wanting Ice Cream. She spent two months in the hospital, rarely eating or talking to anyone. She eventually got better, for a short time and was permitted to go home, but she has always felt guilty. Her father started calling her worthless, and verbally abusing her. He often compared her to her mother, saying how she was better. He eventually stopped in favor of neglecting Kairi.

One comment from her dad sent Kairi over the edge. That the PPG's were far more better than her. Kairi was twelve. Kairi trained brutally, exhausting herself to reach new heights, just to prove her dad wrong. This continued to her adulthood. When she was 18 she moved out, and moved to Bellwood, hoping to start fresh. She took up Archery to help keep her more distracted, she quit the class because it was too easy, when she was 20, a year later, and she used her skils, her intellect and her archery abilities to survive, by hunting. She bought her own Bow and Quiver, no arrows. She decided to craft her own arrows herself, which thanks to her intellect, was simple.

Hunting was an art that required stealth, and quiet. So she decided to buy a Leotard for hunting purposes, eventually that was her main outfit. She hated living in Bellwood though, and decided to move back to Pokey Oaks, deciding to just not interact with her spiteful father.

Do you use nanos: Yes
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Post  superxander10 on Sun Mar 06, 2016 5:34 pm

Name: Jessica wish(a bit corny)
Age:10
Ethnicity:
Race:half human/Anodite
Allegiance:Heroes
Origin:despite alien parent she was on earth
Powers:Manipulation of energy though could be controlled
Appearance:Jessica has a shirt with a crescent moon that's black the moon is white with purple spots occupying it she has straight blond hair with a small airfoil and bangs she wears a skirt with black leggings and black sneakers with two bracelets on her left arm(question can the bracelets be magic?) Her eyes are white with purple pupils(that allowed?)
Strengths:Has a liking for history is smart with math athleticism is one she is good at agility.
Weaknesses: Jessica has a disliking for xtremospawns she is not very good with strengths and she's claustrophobic
Personality: Jessica always keeps up on the good side due to her dark relationship with her mother she refuses to talk to her she doesn't like when people lie or cheat and mainly when she's mad she tends to relate most things to her mother
Jessica loves athleticism and parlour she loves to socialize with others
History:Jessica was born in bellwood to a female anodite and a human who were in love very much Jessica wish when conceived was sent away when her mother had needed to leave when it was revealed her father had left somewhere , Jessica's mother lied to her until finally the truth was told: Her father was killed in battle one of the many decimated by an alien l (a To'kustar) this was later solved when ben 10 took out that same To'kustar devastated she'd resent her mother even to the point of leaving, during the invasion she'd sign up wanting to be at any area as long as it wasn't bellwood
Do you use nano's:No

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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Mar 06, 2016 5:46 pm

Xander, why are you posting a character in a boot camp thread? You're supposed to make a separate thread to post a character in the character creation station.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Sun Mar 06, 2016 6:10 pm

Hey Zero, is Kairi good?
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Mar 06, 2016 6:15 pm

I think, she's a lot better. I think you're getting the hang of creating a good character now. If you want to officially use her, place her up in the creation station so the mods can officially give her a look over.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Sun Mar 06, 2016 7:10 pm

Yay. Okie dokie.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Thu Jun 09, 2016 7:55 pm

*cough*

I want to make a character with powers but I'm pretty sure I'll mess it up somehow. Can we go through it, Prof? Or Zero..or anyone Razz
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Post  zerowing21 on Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:03 pm

We can, but first what kind of powers do you want this character to have.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:06 pm

Magic based for sure. It's going to be a Demon so...Magic

*CoughWhatOtherPowersAreOptions?Cough*
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Post  zerowing21 on Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:10 pm

Well your powers could be from being an EVO, or just being a normal magic user. Or just a demon with magic. You can have someone with powers that have super strength and what not.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:14 pm

Mmmh, I see your point. I'm thinking about maybe a retconned Zeytran with no multiple personalities and a bit more capable of being mature. Still'd have the connection with Demongo of course but yeah, Sound Magic. Could we do a beta on that?
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Post  zerowing21 on Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:21 pm

Yeah we can, just not tonight.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:23 pm

Got it. I think we can skip to Powers and Backstory (for a Demon, anyways) as well as Personality.
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Post  zerowing21 on Sun Jun 12, 2016 10:47 pm

I'd rather we start with a person who has magic and worry about demons later.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:48 pm

Are you sure? Um, okay...

Name: Sylvia 'Angel' Vitkolis

Age: 17

Ethnicity: British

Race: Human/Magic-User

Allegiance: Neutral

Origins: Magic User

Powers: Magnetism Magic

All I wanna do, is see me turn into, a metal woman, a Metal Woman; Angel will manipulate a slab of metal into a secondary 'skin' of metal, or just parts of her, medium

I. AM. MAGNETO: Take two metallic objects and increase their attraction, causing them to collide, medium

Huh, who knew that money hurts: Angel will take coins and fling them at high velocities, high

Me + Metal = Your Death: Angel will use Magnetism to forcefully create a new weapon out of a slab of metal

Magnetic Jump: Reversing magnetic polarity with her metal laced shoes and the ground, she can jump higher, low

Magnetic Control: Angel will take magnetic objects and throw them around in various manners

Appearance: with a purse

Strengths: Strategic Genius, Manipulation/Seduction, very knowledgeable about business.

Weaknesses: Her Pride is a major one as she's so prideful her plans failing is simple  unfathomable to her. She's physically weak and she's prone to panicking. Also if she tries to cook something whoever eats it will get food poisoning.

Personality: Cold, resourceful and manipulative. Angel's well aware of how she looks and uses that to her advantage. She's a business-woman, if you have nothing to offer her yet you claim you did, she will not spare you. She's cold and indifferent, but she has a soft spot for children and other women. She's loyal to her few allies to the end. She also does not lie, however, as she believes "If you need to lie, well..you just aren't a very good business person, aren't you?" She will not cause unnecessary deaths and she is quite generous with her money.

History: Spoiled rotten by her wealthy, yet inattentive, parents, Sylvia learned early on how to deal with business. Her father often took her to work with him at his business company, and she picked it up. When she became older, and thus, it was less 'cute' to bring his daughter with him as often, they hired a nanny for her. Said Nanny's name was Atropos. Atropos was kind, yet stern with Sylvia and grew into a motherly role.

Sylvia, at the park one day, fell off of the monkey-bars and scraped her legs. Sobbing, Atropos rushed over and tended to Sylvia. After buying an ice cream cone, she headed back home to her penthouse.

With her private tutor, Sylvia began learning about business and, unknown to anyone else and even unknown to her tutor, manipulation. Increasingly spoiled, Sylvia at age 4 had called Atropos mom in front of her own parents, causing Atropos to get fired. Sylvia became colder and much more distant.

At age 9, Sylvia began practicing her magical abilities with determination. While she was not very good with Pyro or say Noctem, she excelled with Magnetism. She began focusing exclusively on Magnetism, merely having the theoretical knowledge on the other magic schools. Sylvia had even begun carrying around slabs of metal in her 'purse' to practice on when she could.

At age 14, Sylvia had begun giving advice to her aging parents on how to run the company, to slowly transition it into how she would run it, as their heir. This culminated in, at age 15 she killed her own parents using Huh, Who Know Money Could Hurt at them in a particularly gruesome manner.

Head of a company at just age 15, Sylvia adopted the alias Angel as she believed that was what she was: A living angel on earth. TBC

To what extent are we allowed to go into darker things?


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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Jun 13, 2016 2:24 pm

Caucasian isn't an ethnicity, that's a skin color.

I say the blood bending is too powerful. I'm not gonna allow the ability to go that far.

Cooking can't be used as strength or a weakness since kyra is tired of seeing it used.

How is her pride a weakness?

So she's manipulative, that's just a trait, how does it become a strength?

Her personality needs more to it.

History needs to be expanded.
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Post  youngjusticeforever on Mon Jun 13, 2016 2:48 pm

Partially edited.

Got it.

Okay, I knew I was pushing it.

It was more of a joke really.

Her pride's a weakness because she believes she can do no wrong and that she's God's gift to humanity. Surely you can see how it can be a weakness.

She's really manipulative. She's good at it. A strength was defined as "what are they good at?", she's really good at manipulation.

Can you provide examples?

I know, I need to work on it later, hence it is a W.I.P. but I can't today or yesterday cause yesterday I had a date and today I'm with a friend all day.
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Jun 13, 2016 3:27 pm

But how does it affect her in how she does things? Does it make her enraged when something goes wrong or what?

She might be good at it, but what makes her good in it. You need to expand on it or it will just be a personality trait.

You are putting out a lot of her negative traits and not putting out positive ones.

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Post  youngjusticeforever on Mon Jun 13, 2016 3:53 pm

zerowing21 wrote:But how does it affect her in how she does things? Does it make her enraged when something goes wrong or what?

She might be good at it, but what makes her good in it. You need to expand on it or it will just be a personality trait.

You are putting out a lot of her negative traits and not putting out positive ones.


She cannot even fathom where her plans go wrong.

That depends actually, what's the limit with her manipulation? I originally intended for a seduction based one, but I'm not sure anymore

Because she doesn't have that many positive attributes in the first place.

Also, I'd like Kairi to eventually have a relationship with an CN character, should I PM you?
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Post  zerowing21 on Mon Jun 13, 2016 4:08 pm

Try to expand it beyond that.

Depends on how far a user will allow you to manipulate them.

Well you have to list positive traits or she is incomplete.


Well, who did you have in mind for Kairi to be in a relationship with? Just tell me here.
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