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Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

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Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:43 pm

Name: Gene Erickson
Age: 21
Ethnicity: American
Race: Human
Allegiance: Good
Origins: Human
Appearence:hes about 5ft 11inchs has broad shoulder brown hair brown eyes always wears a football jacket his hair is cut short and fairly generic looking.
Strengths:
+He has some minor hand to hand combat skills
+Great under preasure and not prone to panicking
+He used to play football for his comunity colleges team hes slightly above average in his pysical shape
Weaknesses:
+He is not good at talking about his emotions and is prone to ingoring them in himself an others
+He has a irrational fear of clowns that overrides his normaly calm and collected attitude
+He has an intense fear of being a failure and not living up to his Dads expectations
+He can be extremly arrogant and because of this during combat he can be distracted

Personality: He likes sports and some videogames. He never could understand the appeal of TV or movies because you dont interact with them. He is very physical and doesnt like to stay still. He hates fuse and takes his grudge very seriously. Once Gene has set his mind on doing something he wont hesitate and will go and do it regardless of how hard it might be, he wants too personally take down fuse. He is very competitive. He is arrogant and at times it can get the best of him.  

History: On the very day Gene was born his grandfather died, his parents have told him its not his fault and it had nothing to do with him but he feels guilty for not letting them be with his grandpa when he died his grandmother blames him and is a senile old lady.When Gene was around 5 he visited his Grandma and shouted allsorts of nasty things at him including 'your the reason your mom and dad couldnt see there father on his deathbed!' His mom and dad then had to explain to him what happend. What his crazy senile grandmother shouted really stuck with him and he still blames himself. His Father was a retired military member his mother a stay at home mom. Gene grew up being somewhat unpopular and a bit of a wall flower he stayed to the sidelines and only really stood out in gym class. His Gym teacher noticed this and convinced himto join the football team, He quickly discovered he had a knack for it and became the teams star player for awhile. Gene lived an uterwise extremly normal life other then being good at sports he graduated from highschool with a b- average, and went to a comunity coledge where he played on the schools football team he was no longer the star there but he still enjoyed it none the less. Then one day he was excepted to his number one college choice, But alas is was not ment to be his new college that very day of his acceptance was destroyed by one of fuses terra formers. Since then he has sworn vengence on fuse and all his troops.
Do you use nanos: Yes he can but he doesnt know it yet


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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:53 pm

Caucasian is not ethnicity. We mean for that ethnic origins, like Egyptian, Canadian, etc.

You can just leave the power section out if he has no powers.

How is his community college education a strength? Can you explain in detail?

The first weakness is more or less something that runs for everyone that's human so it doesn't count as a weakness.

You need a minimum of 3 weaknesses for it to be considered balance with 4 strengths.

I know this might be a WIP, but can you please expand the personality? We like to see 3 positive and negative traits.

For history, can you add more meat to the bone? Like his early life and growing up?

This isn't a bad start at all.
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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 1:56 pm

@zerowing 21
I edited it should I have just put the new one on a seprate line?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:17 pm

No you just need to tell us that you edited, but do not repost the sheet.

I still feel like there could be another negative trait you can add in.

Can you maybe add in another weakness due to two fears and Kyra might say since you have two, you need another to balance him out.

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Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:32 pm

I edited again Zero now he has another weakness or would that be more of a charecter flaw? or do charecter flaws count as weaknesses?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:35 pm

If it's personality related, it doesn't count, but if you explain how it affects him in a negative way (or positive if its a positive trait for a strength) then it counts.
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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:37 pm

Alright so his arrogance distracting him during combat could be considered a weakness ((Cause thats what I edited)) is an ok one?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 3:27 pm

That would work.
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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 3:29 pm

Ok so anything else that needs to be done before Gene is good to go?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 3:56 pm

I think a bit more to history will do, you also need atm, two approvals from the staff.
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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:05 pm

Alright I added more to the history when do you think the other mods will get to look over it? Any suggestions in the mean time?
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:09 pm

What age did Gene learn he was born the same day his grandfather died?

Also you have Eric in the personality when you should have Gene.
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Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:16 pm

Fixed it the reason it said Eric was cause I was thinking of his last name while typing so Typo would be the correct answer to that.
I also added why he both blames himself and when he found out about his grandfathers death
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:38 pm

Don't forget to put in the personality that he's arrogant.

I'm not sure when one of the others will be on to take a look at the character, but hopefully soon.
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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:48 pm

Ok then I tossed that in and thanks Zero for helping, I hope they look at mine soon as well.
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Post  Mr.Didathing on Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:06 pm

I feel like I've got a decent grasp on this guy. I'll give it an approval.
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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:11 pm

How many mods are there that I need to have approve mr Erickson?
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:13 pm

I'll give an approval.

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Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:16 pm

Do I have enough mods approvals to go forward and use him?
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Post  Kyra_Xyrespace on Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:29 pm

Yes, you can use him.

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Re: Gene Erickson the best name for an OC ever

Post  asmansa on Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:30 pm

Thank you thats nice too know *u*
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Post  zerowing21 on Fri Jul 01, 2016 7:24 pm

And now you have been added to the role players group, so you have full access to the rp section to post in. Sorry for the inconvenience if you tried posting in the last hour.
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Post  Rioxnation on Sat Jul 02, 2016 12:39 pm

I'll give an approval
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Post  Mr.Didathing on Sat Jul 02, 2016 2:01 pm

I don't think yours counts.
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