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Grey "Storm" Kain

Post  NelsonGaimz on Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:49 am

Name: Grey Kain.
Age:21
Ethnicity:British.
Race:Human
Allegiance:Human.
Origin:School-Electro.
Powers:Able to use electricity in various aggresive and defensive ways.
Strengths:-Able to create an EMP blast and fry electronics.
          -He's really stealthy, good for infiltration mission.
          -His powers can also conduct to any conductive material.
Weakness:-Cannot hit anywone wearing non-conductive armor. (Rubber,ect)
            -Being a human, he's really weak, can get sick, and he's also slow.
            -His EMP blast drains his powers for 30 minutes.
            -Can get tired if his powers are used to much. (Spam)
-He functions like a battery, he's drainable.
Appearance:Usually uses a blue hoodie, has a beard connected to his moustache. Pretty tall, almost 2 meter. Has blue glowing eyes that activates during usage of his power.
Special skills:-EMP Wave. (Fries electronics) [Full power, drains his energy]
                  -Charge. (Can be passive or active, by passive he will charge overtime, and by active he drains power from an electric source.)
                   -Full Watt. (Full use of his powers for one last strike.)[Full power, Fully draining him.]
Personality:Is close to dear friends, easily pissed off if he sees an innocent getting hurt,can be dead serious,likes jokes.He's a good teammate and a good at following orders. Perfect for raids.Really comedic and entertaining person.
History:One of the top students in the Electro School, Was born in an abusive family where he got his will to protect people from the pains he felt. He's been protecting his town (Black Hill) ever since he finished School. He's looking to join an organization that protects the innocent.During the start of the fuse war, his grandma unfortunately got attacked by a fuse and was put to a medically induced coma. This sent him furious, he went on to slaughter every fuse in his town and proceeded to put himself out of commision for 1 month. After being deemed healthy enough to fight again he went on in search for an organization that has the same cause as he does.
Does he uses nanos:No, He prefers to be a lone wolf.


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Re: Grey "Storm" Kain

Post  zerowing21 on Sat Jul 09, 2016 6:48 pm

Alright, for strengths, you can't have them all power related. Try making a few that aren't.

Again same thing with weakness, all are related to his powers.

We need more for appearance, like how tall he is, etc etc.

Please say if the power he uses is a high powered attack, medium or low.

Expand the personality, that's barely bare bones.

You need to expand history too. Why does he join the war against fuse and more of his early life.
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Re: Grey "Storm" Kain

Post  NelsonGaimz on Sun Jul 10, 2016 7:23 am

What'da bout that.
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Re: Grey "Storm" Kain

Post  zerowing21 on Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:55 am

Allegiance isn't human,is he good, bad or neutral?

Still have two power related, strengths, try another type of strength.

The being human and getting sick weakness affects everyone so it doesn't count here.

You still need to say if the powers are high medium or low.

You need three negative traits for the personality to balance the character out. You can't just have positive things.

There needs to be more on his early life, like his parents and the abuse. How did he get his powers etc.
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